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[Feedback Thread] Alise von Ravensberg

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[Feedback Thread] Alise von Ravensberg
Offline Nekrotalis
03-26-2018, 02:10 AM, (This post was last modified: 04-28-2018, 02:23 AM by Nekrotalis.)
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Since I decided to start a Diary for my currently only major character, I will start one of these.
I am grateful for any Feedback I can get on my character, may it be ingame or on the Forum.
Also please tell me if the colour I am using is acceptable to read.

References to Stories:
[X] Diary of a Countess
[X] Biography: Alise von Ravensberg

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Offline Keller
03-26-2018, 04:52 AM, (This post was last modified: 03-26-2018, 04:54 AM by Keller.)
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The dark green is a little hard to make out on a phone display, generally darker colours tend to become obscure with a black background. I believe it shouldn't be too bad on a computer though.

It's not impossible to read or overly difficult, so perhaps one tick up into a brighter hue might be beneficial. While maintaing your colour scheme of course.


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Offline Val
03-26-2018, 11:40 AM, (This post was last modified: 03-26-2018, 06:38 PM by Val.)
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Hey !

I find the idea original, and especially that bring RP in your main character. Now about the form, the color is in the theme (normal it's Unioners). However i join Krsnik about the "dark" of the color. Maybe on phone it's a little difficult to read, but on PC it's perfect.

Well i can tell many things about the story ( in the literally way) but i'll not write here ( sorry i'm cureently contaminate by my literally exams) . But continue!

That'll be interesting if we can do that with my character too ( i hope you know what i mean Smile ) but we will see that near the Freeport......
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Offline Nekrotalis
04-28-2018, 02:23 AM, (This post was last modified: 04-28-2018, 02:26 AM by Nekrotalis.)
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Thanks you two for the feedback. Due to it I adjusted the colour scheme a bit, it should now be easier to read for peole using a mobile device or at least it is my hope that it will be easier.

Also added a link to the original Biography to the first post.
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Offline Galaxian
04-28-2018, 02:37 AM,
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Hm....

Well written and an interesting read! That's for sure.






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