My obligitory feedback thread on:

[Marburg]

So, I quit the NLH & rebooted a slew of old characters to bring back into the RP fold, & although the story has yet to reach the 2nd page, I'd like some feedback so far up to this point because of the much darker direction.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=35983&hl=

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[Malaclypse 666]

I ain't lettin' my daughter marry you, that's for sure.

I was sitting at the table while you played "Go Fish".

Now that is storytelling.

23's

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[Linkus]

I like it.
Not cliche.
Not over the top.
Not PG.
Not not PG.

Overall, a good mix of things and a nice insight into the Gaians.

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Facilitating the rise of robotics since 0 A.D.

[ugliestmoose]

I don't read too many stories on the forum but I gotta say, that's one of the best I've read so far. It's not the same cliched space battle, which is refreshing, and I got a 28 Days Later vibe from it, kinda sorta - definitely not a bad thing. Should be very interesting where you take the story from here.

[Marburg]

I normally never do this sort of thing with my RP threads, but I have a kind of pseudo-bet going with Hoodlum that I already know he will win...but, here it goes anyway:

The view count will now increase by a factor of 10...watch:yes:

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[bluntpencil2001]

I like the exploration of potentially one of the worst parts of one of Freelancer's factions.

I guess I just like it when everyone is bad. I don't feel so guilty after shooting them. :S

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[Grumblesaur]

Disturbing. I've never heard disease described so horribly and STILL be appealing to read about.

Definitely well-written.

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A way a lone a last a loved a long the riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay,
brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs.

[pchwang]

Funny Marburg... Didn't we have this massive argument...YOU AND I sometime, like half a year ago...

about how it was like...bad to give your stories...like those things called... like...movie ratings?

Just kiddin'. ;)

I've already PM'd you, so you know. Terrific work.

I ain't lettin' my daughter marry you, that's for sure.

Why not? That was a smokin' hot scene right there.

Then again, the fact that I just said that further reinforces the fact that:

1) People on the interwebs are weird.

2) I should never have children.

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[7:42:05 PM][6:51:36 PM] Igor (Smokey): btw terry
[6:51:48 PM] Terrance Cooper: Ye?
[6:52:00 PM] Igor (Smokey): nothin
[6:52:03 PM] Igor (Smokey): just sayin btw
[6:52:05 PM] Terrance Cooper: <_<

Johnny_Haas: you shot anti criuse speed rockets!!!
Johnny_Haas: but why????
Johnny_Haas: ??
Johnny_Haas: why you shoot criuse speed rockets?

[Marburg]

I remember that, but I'm pretty sure it was a bit more than 6 months ago:lol:

My hypocritical logic goes abit like this: 9 times out of 10, people will put a warning on their RP thread titles, not to protect the kiddies, but to guarantee a higher readership. I, on the other hand didn't put the warning in the title, but in this humble little thread here. So...I get to have my cake & eat it too.

Lemme 'splain: I normally always prefer the 'under the radar' approach with my writing & don't self promote...but sometimes my ego says "FEED ME" & therefore, sometimes I just gotta do it.

Alot of people see this thread w/ my name on it & go: "Oh god, not him again...I hate that guy" & ignore it, so my 'under the radar' senseabilities are satisfied while I hide my blatantly transparent attempt to bolster my story view count within the feedback thread itself, making my ego happy. It kinda makes me a walking, talking frosted mini wheat:P

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