since I'm back I'm drasticly changing my RP style, tone and direction so I would highly appreciate some consturctive feedback from all of you that are interested in following their current story and development.
If you got any tips or recommendations let me know them or even if you want to see certain stuff more or less.
Otherwise see you swimming in the voids of Discovery.
Honestly, what I just read in “Litany: Devourment” feels like a genuine piece of art. The whole thing drips with atmosphere — dark, ritualistic, almost religious. It comes across like a blend of cosmic horror and spiritual transformation. The feeling it gives off is intense — you're not sure if it’s enlightenment or a complete mental breakdown.
All the glyphs, the voices, the fragmented thoughts and warped perception make it seem like some higher force is slowly taking over. The language is poetic and symbolic without falling into cliché. It genuinely reads like a litany — not just text, but something a character would actually chant while their world is crumbling from the inside out.
Lines like “We must tear. To be whole.” hit like mantras — a conflict between destruction and transcendence. The whole thing pulls you in, like you're watching some kind of cult ritual play out in deep space. I can clearly visualize the pulsing core, the ship like a living entity — every part is vividly written.
If it keeps going in this direction, it's going to be one hell of a story. Big respect to the autor......
Captain Echo “Flying free between the stars. No flag, no chains.”
