The Life Of John Carcless

[seanstakes]

It Was a Beautiful Day On Planet Malta, The Green Sun was Exceptionally Bright Today, but everybody knew that it was the one day, he loved the most, it was the day he became a Man, yes His 18th Birthday, in order for him to become a Man he had to have 150 GMG/BHG kills Under His belt and do a simple patrol mission In Omicron Alpha, he completed this to his Avail, and became a True Outcast, his Dad Rewarded him with a 60million Credit Bonus to his Account.

"Wow, Thanks Dad you are truly a Kind Person That I Know off"

"Now Son Dont go spending all that money in a sudden ok?"

But It Was Too Late John Carcless had run out the door and to the Shipyard, he bashed the doors open and went up to the counter.
"Yes? Can i help you?"

"What Ships have you got available today!!!"

"Well we have about 6 Sabres, 3 Destroyers and No Battleships sadly."

"I'll take the Destroyer!"

The Crews worked on installing the newest Cerberus Cruiser Turrets on his ship, and the shipyard boss threw the keys to him and said "have fun"

He Signaled the control tower, and told them he wanted to undock.

"Undock Approved, Good Luck Out There"

He Was Now sitting in the Captains Seat of his New Destroyer, he explored the ship while it was in auto-pilot and had a chat with the persons stationed at the various Turrets Locations.

Then He Had An Idea.

He Set Course For The Green Cloud at the Edge of the System, it had being rumored that any Outcast who was foolish to go in there would not come back out, the only to come back out were the members of the Exclusive Ghosts Of Ragriz Squadron.

As They Entered The Cloud, all was fine, but he had lost his coordinates and was frantically searching for a Map Of This Cloud, he kept going and going and going, and eventually come across the Outcast Graveyard.

This is an errie place, he thought

He Then Spotted Hostiles On The Scanner, It Was a Blue Substance, and was Closing In Fast, it shot volley's of strong lasers that destroyed his thruster in 2 hits and took out one of his men.

He then entered the JH that was nearby not knowing what was on the otherside.

It Threw him out in a Pink System which was very beautiful he thought, then suddenly 4 Nomad Battleships appeared and destroyed all his turrets Except 3 of them, he sent a transmission and ordered the 'things' to stop attacking, and to his surprise they stopped...but then they sent a blue alien beam and he was knocked out....

3 Days Later...

He Awoke to find himself in a gruesome place, then a blue creature just jumped up and spoke English to him, Welcome Human, we are nomads, and we have abducted you and you are going to be used as a test subject...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He Punched The Nomad and it flew right and splatted into the wall, he then Ran, and surprisingly he found his ship, and jumped in, he then powered up the engines and bashed through a wall, he set coordinates for an unknown JH and came back to omicron Alpha, he then encounted some BHG scouting for easy Prey, suddenly.....a Blast Of Anger came from him and he started shooting them without Mercy, his turrets were a Deep Pinkish Colour and did massive damage to the BHG killing them instantly, he thought to himself...hey...im going to like these guns,heheehehehehhee.....

*end*

This is My First RP story and I hope people like it, i dont want any Insults, or flames or whatever, ok?

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My 'Unknown' Characters

Baldomero[TBH] - Titan

Baldomero.B[TBH] - Praetorian (Planned)

Baldomero.J[TBH] - Private Cruiser, Named the Hezamorph (Planned)

Baldomero.G[TBH] - Good Ole' Rusty. (Corsair Gunboat)

[MrSns]

It sucks

Just jokeing man

Good story u got going hear, keep it up:)

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Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds