Solveig - Story Feedback

[Solveig]

As I'm still quite new to the forum and aware of my dificits in english language, it is very important for me to get a critical and honest response on what I'm writing. Second I do not really have the possibilities yet to improve the style (pictures, signature, etc.) of my threads and posts - maybe there is anyone out there who might help me with that.

I will try to add more story and to enrich the style and the expression of what I'm producing. Also I hope to structure it later, when I got an overview.

Please feel free to formulate any negative and positive critique here.

I'm looking forward to your posts,

Solveig.

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<span style="font-family:Century Gothic">Where shall I leave your escape pod when we are done?

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