Elvin's feedback.

[Elvin]

Greetings.

I will rather not point on my older stories, as they look like one big typo, and it's wise to ignore them.

Right now: Jack McGrady, the Grim

At the moment, it's really short, but it will get expanded a lot today and the next day.

I would be really gratefull if you could me on any nonsential things out there, since english isn't my first language, and thenespecially when I write stories, it get's bad, since i'm thinking more about the ůact" than language. What's worst? I simply can't see it sometimes, up till the point where someopne tells me... Then I melt out of shame.

Well, cheers,
Elvin

PS: Don't stop by just to tell me I suck please. I know that. No need to repeat!

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