New Red Hessian clan intent forum

[Artemis]

i am hoping to start a new Red Hessian group that is called {ESS}. ESS stands for the Elite Squardron of Scorpia. here is the story line:

The Red Hessians are the pirates of Rhienland, but they want to change that. instead of being in Rhienland, they want to expand, and stretch across Sirius, making new allies, and new foes. that is why they are forming this Elite Squadron, to explore more of Sirius, making allies and enemies as they go.

Here is a link to the ESS Invisionfree page:

http://z15.invisionfree.com/ESS_Private_Fo...dex.php?act=idx
as more people join, i will be expanding on this.

anyway, our aims are to make allies and enemies, to explore Sirius and it's deepest wonders, and, most important, to have fun.

this is something i have seen someone from the AW say:

instead of 111111111111111on1111111111pvp!!!!wht!!!! say sir, would u like to do some training.
that is absolute (the following word has been deleted for the wellfare and protection of younger children).
i'm not saying i agree with saying 11111111111on111111111111pvp!!!wht!!!, i'm saying, that u shouldn't have to call people who have been in the clan longer then u sir, or supreme commander, cos thats just plain (the following word has been deleted for the wellfare and protection of younder children).
u should just call them by there name, like, if in game i'm Artemis, instead of saying sir, would u like to do some training or 1111111111on111111111111pvp!!!wht!!!, u should just say:
Hey Artemis want to have some fun??, or Artemis do u want to have a fight??.

anyway, this clan is for friendly people who want to have fun with the game and not have to call everybody supreme commander or sir, or have to listen to, i'm better then u ha ha i could so totally own u, cos if i see someone saying that, they will have a warning.


i feel everybody deserves a few chances, everybody would get 3 chances. i don't really care about whats happened before, or anything like that, i feel that if u want to change that and try having fun instead of getting punished every time u do something, u deserve more chances.


Anyway, the aim is to have some fun, and please if u join don't start going up to people and giving them abuse, because:
1) it would make ESS look bad,
2) it would make that person very upset and thats the opposite reason that i'm making this clan.


and if somebody is giving u abuse, please don't retaliate, just take a screenshot, and pm me with it ASAP.

Thanks for reading this and i hope u like my group proposal.

[Jwnantze]

1. You need to gain a lot of respect before starting a faction
2. We already have a Red Hession Faction
3. You already tried to start a faction by the same name and we said no. This one is no different.
4. As for RP, Serius wide pirates are not acceptable unless its Outcast or Corsair, This is Red Hessian and they are limited to RH and omega territory.

Solve those issues and it might fly!

---

There is nothing worth living for, unless it is worth dying for. -Elizabeth Elliott

[Artemis]

and there are 3 outcast factions. and this faction is alot different. and, Red Hessians could go anywhere they want to, there allies with groups that they can hang around with.

[Artemis]

also Duke, u have links to two different clans there, one u started, and one i don't know if u started. but the rules state that if u start a faction, can can not be in any other faction/clan/group. so, if u started Epigoni, how were u in RHA aswell?? also, The Epigoni made it so Outcasts had 4 clans, so how come no people shouted at u about that??

[LancerZero]

With all due respect, as Duke said we've already got a Hessian faction...we've worked hard on our RP, and I daresay we're doing a decent job. Your RP, however, appears a little thin. "They want to expand"? Why? They were formed to return Rheinland to the way it was supposed to be after the popular revolution. I don't see why they'd expand into other parts of Sirius. It's not their business; Rheinland is.

And you might also explain how the term "Elite Squadron of Scorpia" relates at all to the Red Hessians.

---

Current Stories
Linus' Lackadaisical Logs(upd.3-1-10)
Archived Logs
In the Queen's Service(upd.4-21-10) | The Finer Things in Life (upd.4-8-10)
Silvy's Story(upd.2-29-08) | Conrad's Flight & Fight(upd.1-14-08)

[Vape]

all i have to say is im in
but yeah improve on the RP thing

---

[Artemis]

the first good comment, thank u very much Vape. and i don't see why not?? also, maybe we could turn this from critisism to, constructive critisism.

also about the rp, how can i improve on it???. thats all there is to say about ESS i guess.

[Jwnantze]

Aliright bud,
1. ive never started a faction, epigoni was Dop's faction
2. We merged with RoS, there are only 3 outcast factions.
3. Red hessians are a MUCH smaller faction than outcast, they dont need a second clan.

---

There is nothing worth living for, unless it is worth dying for. -Elizabeth Elliott

[Vape]

but still its a good idea, but artemis...as ive been told by others with my faction ideas.. is that you need to come up with it on your own, we can give you some ideas but its YOUR faction

---

[Artemis]

and ok, i was mistaken then, i'm sorry. but i still don't feel it's fair to cristise me much about wanting people to all be together and have some fun, well, some people, cos if everybody was together there wouldn't be anybody to kill now would there?

ok Vape, can u give me some ideas??