//Ok, you dont need to be so rude, since the last I wrote was "what do you think mate"
INCOMING TRANSMISSION
Ship ID: Malvinas.Argentinas
From: Cpt. Sal Paradise
To: Kim Allen
Subject: Recruitment roster
Name: Sal Paradise
Birth place: Planet Manhattan, New York System
Age: 28
Work History: I have always worked in the transport industry but my arrival to OSC was shortly ago. My own Luxury Liner is being built as we speak, actually, this is the first transmission from it´s cockpit.
Area of work you wish to apply for: (please mark X for which Area of Work, and only one please)
[ ]Security
[X]Transportation
Short paragraph about yourself: I have always loved the road. I find life demostrates itself in its whole splendor when you are travelling. So one day I decided to make the road my way of life, and since then I have never been on one same spot of Sirius for more than one month.
//OORP section:
Do you understand the Game rules: YES
Skype: escopton
The reason why you like Orbital Spa and Cruise as a NPC faction: I really like to travel man.
By applying you understand that you might not be able to get the ship you want that you are entitled to due to the status of Funds at the time you apply. I DO
You may join both areas however will be dependant on Funds at the time and your rank. I OWN A ROC CIVILIAN BOMBER FLYING UNDER THE OSC FLAG TOO
After carefull consideration you have been successfull in the first part of the application process. I will contact you shortly via your S K Y P E Nueral Net Service.
I had no intention to be rude to you. It's just I have seen the stated happen straight after PanGal finished and that didn't go to well. I have watched nearly every attempt for OSC fail or burn out. The longest running dedicated players for OSC have been pretty much me and a couple other players. One of which is already in the group. A few others have not been online for a while. Very likely for real life issues.
Name: Silvia Greer Birth place: Planet Curacao Age: 21 Work History: Lawful Mercenary in Liberty and Bretonia space. Area of work you wish to apply for: (please mark X for which Area of Work, and only one please)
[X]Security
[]Transportation
Short paragraph about yourself: She is born on the Planet Curacao from a mother Angela Greer and unknown father, Angelina never told her that story. Ronald has accepted her as a sister and all his life he behaved protectively toward her, brother was the only man in the world for her eyes. Their father was in the war against the nomads, Ronald was only man in the house and he did everything to keep them safe... He started to work like Merc because they needed cash for future living, Silvia looked on him like a hero (He was a hero for them in that moment). Silvia wanted to be with brother and she demands to work with him as soon as she become adult, for Silvia`s 21 birthday brother Ronald gave her ship with full equipment, as he is good pilot he trained her as best he could.
Silvia finished School of Economics, during her school time she had only one boyfriend. Love for her was the most important thing in life. She is a love closed, still waiting for the right guy who will take her heart. Her brother and Silvia will work only for the Lawful force, dirty jobs are not their style.
//OORP section:
Do you understand the Game rules: YES Skype: koske667
The reason why you like Orbital Spa and Cruise as a NPC faction.
By applying you understand that you might not be able to get the ship you want that you are entitled to due to the status of Funds at the time you apply.
You may join both areas however will be dependant on Funds at the time and your rank.
After carefull consideration you have been successfull in the first part of the application process. I will contact you shortly via your S K Y P E Nueral Net Service.
Bumping as we are still around and active. A few edits have been made and a few things are under discussion. All edits that will likely be removed in the future are <strike>marked like this</strike>.
Anyway we are very much wanting to increase our activity, and thsu it's members. If you would like to join please fill out the application form. A copy is provided below for your ease.
Name:
Birth place:
Age:
Work History:
Area of work you wish to apply for: (please mark X for which Area of Work, and only one please)
[]Security
[]Transportation (Passengers and/or Supplies)
Short paragraph about yourself:
//OORP section:
Do you understand the Game rules:
Skype:
The reason why you like Orbital Spa and Cruise as a NPC faction:
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I'll use this as a feedback thread.
This was one of the least professional looking replies to diplomacy I've ever seen on these forums. If that's how you're going to continue, you might as well throw in the towel now and let someone else deal with the paperwork. InRP, it was rude, inflammatory and abrasive.
In this RP, they're official delegates of an entire House. You're a small corporate rep who's living on a resort planet that is directly on their border. You do not want to draw the ire of either Liberty or Bretonia. If ya do, they might start paying attention to what goes on down on Curacao and enforcing some laws.
Plus, they're right. OSC signed a contract. It doesn't matter if you don't see it as valid. Without the agreement of two other parties, the contract can't be altered or abandoned. If you do, you can be held in breach, and the other three parties get to pull down your pants, bend you over and have fun with the corporation as a whole.
I would also point out that in my view the replies I recieved were abrasive and sarcastic.
No where in the original thread did I say that OS&C is wishing to remove itself. (Yes I placed a view of Kim, but I am not wrong in doing that)
I will point you to the following qoute
Quote:This is a notification that we are reviewing the treaty only.
How can you take from that, that my intention is to break from the Signed Treaty. I find it very hard how I can se that someone can take it as such as has been roleplayed in an abrasive and sarcastic tone.
So I do not know why people are taking it as that I am asking for changes to the treaty. Which I am not. I just made a post that OS&C is reviewing it, nothing else. I repeat nothing else. I repeat again as I come in to alot of people who don't bother reading my posts properly, I am just reviewing it, nothing else.
But as I am tired of the greef I have gotten because I have only reacted in roleplay the way I have been treated in roleplay in the past. I will edit the post, pasting my the old post here so that I can here more complaints;
To: Idiots: Baroness Evyn Hunter and Sir Jack Fraser
The Message I gave was that MY EMPLOYER NOT I is reviewing the treaty. I have not said that MY EMPLOYER WILL break from the treaty.
If it is decided that Orbital Spa & Cruise wish's to break from the treaty, we at Orbital Spa and Cruise will no longer consider it valid.
Do not attack me or Orbital Spa and Cruise when I am just saying that my employer is just REVIEWING it. So stop acting like whining babies about something that was not said. Or are you blind!?
Now stop making up stupid things and calm the hell down you blind and complete utter idiots. As obviously you can't read this, "This is a notification that we are reviewing the treaty only." I seriously have no clue what drugs you two are taking, but it is very clear you are high.
Calling the representatives of both Liberty and Bretonia idiots is dumb. Whatever you're tying to do, you're doing it wrong. Unless, of course, you're suicidal and you want to take OSC down with you
Edit: or two Bretonian representatives, whatever. Its still dumb
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Trust me, we read your posts thoroughly. Our delegates responded to let you know that even if your review did take place, it wouldn't be allowed to make any practical changes without the consent of another two parties.
' Wrote:However the current train of thought with in is to break from the Treaty considering its age and the needs of Orbital Spa & Cruise with Curacao.
' Wrote:If it is decided that Orbital Spa & Cruise wish's to break from the treaty, we at Orbital Spa and Cruise will no longer consider it valid.
I'd say they probably deduced that from these two quotes, then made their own replies in order to nip the review in the bud.
Either way, that second response does not befit corporate diplomacy. If I'd hired an employee who responded like that, I'd have them suspended without pay, then fired as soon as their notice was up. If you're insulted, you turn the cheek and respond with courtesy and tact. That is what diplomacy is all about, not a pissing contest to see who can be the snarkiest.