The Black Ravens - Feedback

[The Black Ravens]

first off, those colors are horrible and annoying to try and read. granted, Katana's color isnt much better.

2. i get you want to be creative, but there are existing factions out there that could use people playing them.

Maybe orange?

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[Apollon]

You still haven't answered Sabre's second question, nor the ship related one.

You basically don't have a secret allegiance with LN/BAF/LSF/BIS while having pirate IDs, trying to use their ships while you don't a have a solid background to back you up.

[The Black Ravens]

You still haven't answered Sabre's second question, nor the ship related one.

You basically don't have a secret allegiance with LN/BAF/LSF/BIS while having pirate IDs, trying to use their ships while you don't a have a solid background to back you up.

Well. "Ravens" DONT use Liberty/Bretonia lawful forces ships. Only BW or Civillian ships.

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[Thyrzul]

Well, unless both the Bretonian and Libertonian sides agree with the backstory it will look like a bunch of pirates stealing naval technology they can't properly use anyways.

Edit: got ninja'd.

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[The Black Ravens]

Well, unless both the Bretonian and Libertonian sides agree with the backstory it will look like a bunch of pirates stealing naval technology they can't properly use anyways.

Edit: got ninja'd.

Anyway. We dont use any LN/BAF technologies.

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[Apollon]

Anyway, As Thyr said. Make sure to contact both BAF| and [LN] HCes if you want to backup your story and make it 'true'. Because it will look like a group of pirates who're trying to ally with lawful forces and failing to do so, and will get shot eventually.

But for your story line, I greatly suggest switching to Privateer ID.

[Vredes]

Anyway, As Thyr said. Make sure to contact both BAF| and [LN] HCes if you want to backup your story and make it 'true'. Because it will look like a group of pirates who're trying to ally with lawful forces and failing to do so, and will get shot eventually.

But for your story line, I greatly suggest switching to Privateer ID.

The Privateer Faction is dead but has the same goals, why dont you just join them or make a request for change in leadership?

[The Black Ravens]

Anyway, As Thyr said. Make sure to contact both BAF| and [LN] HCes if you want to backup your story and make it 'true'. Because it will look like a group of pirates who're trying to ally with lawful forces and failing to do so, and will get shot eventually.

But for your story line, I greatly suggest switching to Privateer ID.

I am think about ID. So...I go to speak with BAF| and [LN] HC-es now.

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[Thyrzul]

What still baffles me is that however unique you want your idea to be, at this moment it technically doesn't look much more than another faction to pew Gallic lawfuls and corporations in the Taus and Gallia, to which we already have a ton of other factions.

Pew Gallic lawfuls in Bretonia/Taus: LN, LSF, BAF, BPA, BIS, Privateers, Council, CR, Maquis, Brigands, Outcasts
Pew Gallic civilians in Bretonia/Taus: LN, LSF, BAF, BPA, BIS, Privateers, CR, Maquis, Brigands, Outcasts
Pew Gallic lawfuls in Gallia: LSF, BIS, Privateers, Council, Maquis, Brigands, Outcasts
Pew Gallic civilians in Gallia: LSF, BIS, Privateers, Maquis, Brigands, Outcasts

The following factions fit all the categories: LSF, BIS, Privateers, Maquis, Brigands, Outcasts. Maquis are rather for terrorism, LSF and BIS aren't for piracy either (rather just mere disruption of the flow of supplies), if you want to outright pirate, you can still chose Privateers, Brigands, Outcasts, from which I guess we can discard Outcasts due to your conflict mentioned in your story, and Brigands for being of Gallic origin. The result is that Privateers are still the closest to what you might want to be, but keep in mind that the conclusions I've drawn are based on the little information you've shared with us so far.

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[The Black Ravens]

Well, I am make the little update to style, later begin talk with [LN] and BAF| leader's

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