Help requested [SA]

[timmychen]

i would like to join the Southern aliance my name is Jordan.Andersson i have pretty good Flying experience, i know my way around liberty space pretty good, //i can rp though i am not very good at it, i am 27 years old, i can fly most fighters from liberty, i promis to never run away from a hostile target, // i have the money for the ship so you won't have to waste much money on me, i dont know if there is much more to say about me so if there is something you are wondering contact me ((<[jordan]>)).

Though I have no say on whether you're accepted or not, I suggest you do two things:
1) Reread the entire first post in this thread.
2) Look at your post, then look at other peoples' posts. Note the difference.

[skoko]

i would like to join the Southern aliance my name is Jordan.Andersson i have pretty good Flying experience, i know my way around liberty space pretty good, //i can rp though i am not very good at it, i am 27 years old, i can fly most fighters from liberty, i promis to never run away from a hostile target, // i have the money for the ship so you won't have to waste much money on me, i dont know if there is much more to say about me so if there is something you are wondering contact me ((<[jordan]>)).

Jordon here is your answer

Incoming transmission..
Comm ID: Captain John Talon
To: <strike>John Edwards</strike> Jordon

Sir, we'll need a more detailed history of yourself if you want to be considered to be a valid candidate. We hope to receive a more detailed biography soon.

Ending transmission..

ooRP: Please write a longer and more detailed RP story, we'd like to see that our members are actually capable of RP.

Please note how other people applied and do the same thing

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<blockquote>Was member of : [LN] [LR] [RoS] Keepers (NovaPG) [AU]

[SA]-Jake.Benson - Benson's life
Alvaro Himenez of [RoS]- Alvaro's story</blockquote>

[jimmy Patterson]

my prior applacation i had mis posted in articles of origin please disreguard or rather should my LSF caree turn south save ive elected to join LSF(woulda joined navy but that post was the only one i could post my app in cuz your recruitment thred link in faction status came up with "the link you have clicked may be too old delted or broken " as a board message

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kudos tommeh for sig

[Dragonego]

Forum Handle: -Dragonego

Name/Callsign: -Dragonego

Other characters: -LNS.Swordfish, [Lane_security].Fox, Guns"n"Stuff, Dragonego

IMPORTANT, READ, AGREEMENT

Have you read every word on this page? -Yes

Do you agree with the rules of the South Alliance? -Yes

Will you obey your superiors? -Yes

Will you get rid of the tag if you have failed to comply to any of these questions above? -Yes


STORY:

Kendrick Salvatore (AKA Dragonego) was born on Willard Research Station, California. He Hated the station as soon as he laid eyes on it, it was a horribly boring, uneventful place. he was forced to stay there thought by his caring parents, Adelia and Frank Salvatore. As the years went by Kendrick learned many things from his father, including how to fire a Implagator MKII Station Turret (Much to his mothers disappointment) ,how to fly and maintain a variety of ships and much more. As he grew closer to his father with each coming day his mother was more and more pushed away from the family, until one day she disappeared. (No one knew what happened but it is assumed that she flew off or was kidnapped as there was a Hawk Civilian fighter missing from the hanger) after that him and his father never quite interacted in the same way. his father would somtimes snap at Kendrick, once he even his his helpless son. One day his father told him that he needed to get a job to help with food and taxes (And protection money, but he didn't mention this to Kendrick) or he would be kicked out of the station, Kendrick loved the idea of being off the godforsaken station but then thought of the consequences. Where would he go? What about if Xenos or Rouges Attacked him? He decided against it in the and as he just didn't want to take the risk of being killed or held hostage, or worse. So he applied for the Southern Alliance.

And here we are.

[Etaphreven]

CommID: Captain Michael Diehardt
To: Applicant Kendrick Salvatore

Congratulations, you have been accepted into the probationary rank of Navyman Recruit, the naming conventions are as follows.

[SA]-Firstname.Lastname

Meet naval officers in space for registry checks after fitting a 'Defender HF'.

[johnedwards]

CommID: Captain Michael Diehardt
To: Applicant Kendrick Salvatore

Congratulations, you have been accepted into the probationary rank of Navyman Recruit, the naming conventions are as follows.

[SA]-Firstname.Lastname

Meet naval officers in space for registry checks after fitting a 'Defender HF'.

Incoming Transmission, Location: Denver, Colorado

Any more on my recent application?

It would only seem appropriate that the earlier applications were considered too, and some feedback would be much appreciated for the greatly updated application I posted not long after it was requested.

Thanks,

John Edwards, Planet Denver.

End Transmission

[DarkRupture]

Forum Handle: DarkRupture

Name/Callsign: DarkRupture

Other characters: LNS. Mt.Lucania. KoF darkrupture, KoF invitcus, Deviant.Vortex,
in
IMPORTANT, READ, AGREEMENT

Have you read every word on this page? Yes

Do you agree with the rules of the South Alliance? Yes

Will you obey your superiors? Yes

Will you get rid of the tag if you have failed to comply to any of these questions above? Yes


STORY:

Standby........ENabling Liberty Citizen database....

error....enter access code

._._._._

codes recieved standby....

password accepted pulling information,



Name: Shad Allen Winston
Age: 25
Race: Human
Gender: Male

Last Known Physical Description: 6'0", medium red hair, blue eyes

Known history: The son of a middle class family with only one other sibling, a younger sister of 19 named Stephanie. The father, George Winston, primarily worked as a Navy contractor for various Liberty installations on planets Denver and later Manhattan. The mother, Grace Winston, was a housewife. Several years after moving to planet Manhattan, George contracted a rare and terminal disease that doctors were unable to diagnose in time to save him. This plunged the family into severe debt and forced the mother into prostitution to support her children at the time due to a lack of job skills. The mother died 9 years ago from various illnesses as a result of poor physical health. The children were taken into foster care at that time. However Shad began to see the pirates as responsible for his parents' deaths and began showing signs of violent behavior only two months after her foster care began. Shortly after this started occurring, one of their foster parents molested Stephanie while drunk after which Shad was found standing over his body covered in blood and holding the man's pocket knife. Shad went to the juvenile detention center of liberty and was later let off due to multiple evidence of self defense when security tapes found that the foster that molested stephainie was going to kill shad. Shad Was offered a position in the liberty govenment because his dad was part of the Navy and he has no family and no home, they offered him a chance to start a new life. This is when shad walked into the recruitment office and filled out an application for Navy, Out of the 2 choices he picked the Sounthern Alliance over the Northern Liberty Navy. Now he waits...

Message ends...


Shutting off database

[Titan]

Incoming transmission..
Comm ID: Captain John Talon
To: Shad Allen Winston, John Edwards

Congratulations recruits, you have been accepted into the probationary rank of Navyman Recruit, you are to launch your ships at the earliest possible notice and contact the nearest SA officer for further instructions.

Ending transmission..

ooRP: Naming convention is as Eta said.. [SA]-Firstname.Lastname of your character.

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[Titan]

Incoming transmission..
Comm ID: Captain John Talon
To: Greg

Sir, you are once again accepted into the SA, unfortunately we cannot give you the rank or the ship that you once flew for now, but if you'd be willing to equip a guardian or an avenger and meet an officer in space that would be acceptable. You will, considering you have been a commander before, for now immediately be put to the rank of ensign, and I hope to see you advance in ranks again. Good luck and safe voyages.

Ending transmission..

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[SevereTrinity]

Forum Handle: SevereTrinity

Name/Callsign: Spethanie Malaign (Callsign: Spearhead)

Other characters: SevereTrinity



IMPORTANT, READ, AGREEMENT


Have you read every word on this page?

Yes


Do you agree with the rules of the South Alliance?

Yes

Ba
Will you obey your superiors?

Yes


Will you get rid of the tag if you have failed to comply to any of these questions above?

Absolutely



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BACKGROUND STORY


Name: Stephanie Malaign
Age: 24
Race: Human
Gender: Female


Stephanie was only 14 years old when it happened.
Nomads, as a first strike, had started to kill off some of the higher people up in the Houses Chain of Commands.
Her mother and father were two of them, They had served Liberty's leaders for years, until Nomads took their lives.
Stephanie had no knowledge off what had happened to them, but she vowed revenge, and, joining the Liberty Navy, she started to look for her parents, every time she had leave, she would fly around Liberty looking for a clue, anything that told her about what had happened to her parents.
Then, when the Nomad crisis was revealed, she had found something.
The wreckage of the passenger ship that her mother and father had been on when they were going between systems, as the President had been on a tour.
They had captured the President, and killed everyone else.
She heard her mother's voice in the Ships Log when she listend to it.

*Flashback*

This is......
Sara Malaign.....
Some unknown Aliens......
Have taken the President.......
They have already killed my husband......
I am next....
This will be......
My Final Words.......
To whomever reads this.....
Tell my Daughter.....
I love her, and so did her father.....

*End Flashback*


After this, Stephanie decided to do all she could to Avenge her parents, and asked her Commanding Officers to put her in the Force that would be fighting against the Nomads at all times.
Now, with the threat gone, she is waiting for acceptance into the Southern Army