Really glad to see that you managed to get it all the way here. I am sure that with me being the leader it would be far less detailed and worked on. Such effort put into it. If I ever return on this god forsaken place (Disco), would you have a little nice warm spot in Volksfront for the long lost comrade Kristian Hartz? :P
All I can do for your faction (I feel bad, cause I deserted..) is some artwork, so whenever you feel that Volksfront needs some artwork, leave me a message on Skype please.. Other than that, the story and the details are amazing, two thumbs up.. :)
Quote:As we are not depending on piracy due to our funders in New Berlin's high society and the financial support of Interspace Commerce (that allows us to supply our selfs at Kreutzberg and Yanagi)
Just a little niggle, but you stated two Junker bases here, which could lead to a bit of confusion with people thinking that you're referring to them as Interspace bases. The Bundschuh can land at Bonn Station since IC allow them to, so you might want to add that however.
There's also quite a number of spelling errors as well as typos through it, although I won't list them right now as i'm too tired to go through and list every single one XD
' Wrote:Just a little niggle, but you stated two Junker bases here, which could lead to a bit of confusion with people thinking that you're referring to them as Interspace bases. The Bundschuh can land at Bonn Station since IC allow them to, so you might want to add that however.
We could..... if there wouldn't be such a little firepower thingy sitting right next to it, called "Battleship". You either have lot's of damages docking it, or you're almost dead after undocking.....:wacko:
In a brilliant tactical movement, i charged backwards.
FUR DIE LEUTE von RHEINLAND, UMSONST AUTOS, UMSONST WEINERSCHNITZEL, KRAUT, UND BERGE von BRATWURST. UND BIER. UND JAEGERMEISTER, DER NICHT WIRKLICH BIER IST, ABER AUCH GUT IST.
English Transliteration.
THE FOLK'S FACE
FOR THE PEOPLE OF RHEINLAND, FOR FREE CARS, FOR FREE WEINERSCHNITZEL, KRAUT, AND MOUNTAINS OF BRATWURST. AND BEER. AND JAEGERMEISTER, WHICH IS NOT REALLY BEER, BUT IS GOOD TOO.
Disregard the joke. Good faction write-up.
Quote:[7:42:05 PM][6:51:36 PM] Igor (Smokey): btw terry
[6:51:48 PM] Terrance Cooper: Ye?
[6:52:00 PM] Igor (Smokey): nothin
[6:52:03 PM] Igor (Smokey): just sayin btw
[6:52:05 PM] Terrance Cooper: <_<
Quote:Johnny_Haas: you shot anti criuse speed rockets!!!
Johnny_Haas: but why????
Johnny_Haas: ??
Johnny_Haas: why you shoot criuse speed rockets?
Funnily enough, I had suggested that our armory be called the Volkswagon. Cawdor gave me a nasty look via skype and its named the Waffenkammer or something like that, but you aren't the only one that's occurred to.
' Wrote:Funnily enough, I had suggested that our armory be called the Volkswagon. Cawdor gave me a nasty look via skype and its named the Waffenkammer or something like that, but you aren't the only one that's occurred to.
Call it the VW)Kaefer please?:P
Anyways, I'd really love to see this fly officially.
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