I feel there gotta be some climatic event to happen in the story, at least that's what the story comes to slowly bit by bit. Something of a big fight, a loss of will, falling from heaven to earth and sinking below only to emerge from the depths as a new being... :-)
I would really love to RP with one of the Wilde in the future, i have been to O55 before and will gladly relocate one of my ships there for some RP if you wish.
to be specific, the way you present the atmosphere is scenaristic. you dont bother people with lots of environment details trough cold rough mass of text but instead put a more dynamic <current scene> show at new pictures. I like it, the presentation.