Zapp's Never-Dying Feedback Thread

[Jazz]

*gets out the BUMP stick and GRAVEDIGGER'S SHOVEL*

New story!

Light as a feather, Heavy as a mountain

Feedback appreciated.

Ca n we keep this-un alive? I really liked the multiperson story thing. And some of my best work was done here.

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Some say that he is allergic to a fungus found only between the toes of Corsairs,
and that he is oblivious to 98% of Liberty Law. All we know is...
He's called the Busdriver!

[Zapp]

School's starting Monday, so I'm stuck with posting pre-written Flickers for right now (gotta finish summer assignments:P), but I'll get to work on that one next, OK?

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[Dusty Lens]

PM me flickers kthxbai.

[Zapp]

PM me flickers kthxbai.

Nau, read eet liak evereeone else:PNow, whatcha think of it?:P

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[Boss]

AH WANT MOAR DONUT!

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Just go play the game and have fun dammit.

all in all the conclusion is that disco doesn't need antagonist factions, it doesn't need phantoms, it doesn't need nomads, it doesn't need coalition and it doesn't need many other things, no AIs, the game is hijacked by morons to confuse the game with their dickwaving generic competition games mixed up with troll-of-the-day.

[Zapp]

AH WANT MOAR DONUT!

Nau, ah ees planing ta blow eet up:P

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[Boss]

WTFNOEZ!

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Just go play the game and have fun dammit.

all in all the conclusion is that disco doesn't need antagonist factions, it doesn't need phantoms, it doesn't need nomads, it doesn't need coalition and it doesn't need many other things, no AIs, the game is hijacked by morons to confuse the game with their dickwaving generic competition games mixed up with troll-of-the-day.

[Zapp]

In the spirit of Dab's new thread, BUMPAGE!

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[ScornStar]

Feedback for Zapp.

I think you have talent that can keep growing.

However alot of time the constant priase seeking puts me off.

If you sought praise less it would fall on you more.

Tone down the glory hounding and let your talents show through.

I hope I did not offend. I was just giveing my honest 2 cents. Take care buddy.

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Join our cause for a baby free world.

Harvester diplomacy

[Zapp]

Can't believe I just saw this... anyways, I'm not seeking praise, I'm asking if people like/dislike my stories, what I could do to get better, and if they dislike them, why?

And bump:dry:


:crazy:

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