Help me out

[Niezck]

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=26153

Anuva wun!

EDIT: VERY small one this time, a brief sum-up of his life coupled with an initial scene. <3

[Zapp]

Too small Chris.

And I've read Wesen's story, pretty good.

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[Seth Karlo]

Mine are nowhere near finished...

If you guy's like em, then kick me up the butt and make me finish em! I just need encouragement....

Of course, if they're crap, then don't:P

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[BaconSoda]

Too small Chris.

And I've read Wesen's story, pretty good.

Work in progress, Zapp. Keep up with it. It's only the beginning. I'm asking for feedback on how it's coming along.

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[8:32:45 PM] Dusty Lens: Oh no, let me get that. Hello? Oh it's my grandma. She says to be roleplay.
[12:49:19 AM] Elgatodiablo: You know its nice that you have all that proof and all, Bacon... but I just don't believe you.

[Reverend Del]

Zapp critique me! Any of the links in the old sig will do.

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[Niezck]

Work in progress, Zapp. Keep up with it. It's only the beginning. I'm asking for feedback on how it's coming along.

He may have meant me. I, too, am Chris and my link only had 2 (1 now) posts in it.

[Zapp]

Was talking to Niezck, your critiques, Bacon-Chris, were already made earlier in the thread.

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[Zapp]

Seth - I've read your Seth Karlo story, I have one word: paragraphs. The sword fighting scene in the last post is pretty cool, the rest of it is too jerky, not nearly smooth enough.

Del - Read Syn, I like a lot. Unusual point of view. I also read the beginning of the Gathering of Clouds awhile back, that was pretty cool as well.

Also, wanna point you all at my newest story, Arthur Hawkins. I say that only because I'm trying a new writing style on that one, tell me whatcha think.

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[Seth Karlo]

Oooh, thanks:)

Will attempt to remedy that on future chapters.

Seth

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[Niezck]

Zach, enjoy;)