Am I getting through?

[Das Wilde Wesen]

thank you

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[Cawdor]

Oi! how about showing some activity once in a month so people may even think about joining you?

Edit: aww darn, clicked some sig and committed grave dig. sorry for that.

Edit2: its actually the sig above >_>

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[Das Wilde Wesen]

new story here. feedback please.

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[Ceoran]

hmm... The name sounds like an unfortunate translation of "Holy one". In case it's "one" as the number 1 the translation should be "eins". Otherwise better take "Heilige" as full name.

furthermore in post #7 "Taununfled" should be "Taunusfeld" and "Dis" should be "Dies".

The story itself sounds interesting to me and I'm looking forward to maybe see it ingame

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My Stories Outcast laws and structures Join Samura|-

Go play the game, within the given limitations. That is how role play games are played. Not by trying to work around those limitations or whining about them.

[Das Wilde Wesen]

Yes, it is an unfortunate translation of "Holy One" I used an online translator. Yes my german is rusty.

What does Heilige mean? And all the other grammer thingys are fixed. Thank you.

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[Boss]

Heilige = holy.

Nice story so far, can't wait for more.

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Just go play the game and have fun dammit.

all in all the conclusion is that disco doesn't need antagonist factions, it doesn't need phantoms, it doesn't need nomads, it doesn't need coalition and it doesn't need many other things, no AIs, the game is hijacked by morons to confuse the game with their dickwaving generic competition games mixed up with troll-of-the-day.

[Ceoran]

heilig/heilige = holy
der/die/das Heilige (with capital letter) = the holy (one)

So it can be used as a noun too. Since you mentioned "Die Saarbrucken" it should be "Die Heilige" then

sorry it took that long but I broke my internet yesterday ...

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My Stories Outcast laws and structures Join Samura|-

Go play the game, within the given limitations. That is how role play games are played. Not by trying to work around those limitations or whining about them.

[Talesin]

Edit:
Err sorry i clicked on the Feedback-Link of your signature, it was ment to get into the "Das wilde"-Feedback

Greetings,
i can't help with much feedback, since i'm not that familliar with the singleplayer campain, but i still like to add something concerning translation:

[...] ranks of the Kirche die Grunnen Alders (Church of the Green Eagle, the Rheinland state religion which [...]

Church of the green Eagle (one eagle)= Kirche des gruenen Adlers
Church of the green Eagle (more than one eagle)= Kirche der gruenen Adler

ue= ? but i assume you cannot spell ?

And i'm not quite sure about that Gottkanzler thing, i allways though that was merely a rumor, not proven anyhow ingame...


Regards,
Talesin


Edit:
Err sorry i clicked on the Feedback-Link of your signature, it was ment to get into the "Das wilde"-Feedback

[bobby]

G-G-G-Gravedig.

[Talesin]

G-G-G-Gravedig.

For the Emprah?