The Pakhet

[Montezuma/Kukulcan]

From reading your story, i had thought it would be more sleek (possibly shiny) and streamlined (which those wings are not).

Also, i think it shouldnt have windows, as it gives it a human feel which i think you might be trying to avoid.

Just my first thoughts.


@Gloucester: the talarca is now the corvo, which is a zoner reserch cruiser.

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[Linkus]

It's a cockpit strapped to a few engines.
Honestly, I think it's incredibly ugly.

As well as that, the ship does not look Alien whatsoever. It could just as easily be a Sirius ship than an alien one.

Try for instance, multiples of 3. Human ships tend to use multiples of 2. A hint from designed Nommie things from Treewyrm.

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[teschy]

Dunno, if you put some BW textures on it, it would rather look like a Lane Hacker gunboat.

[Tenacity]

yea, I think I'm going to re-design this thing and try to make it look less human.

I was thinking a trilobyte / horseshoe-crab type shape...

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[cobraSting]

Spikes. needz moar spikes...

[shadowjman]

for the Sides of the wings add some sort of extension to the front and back, and make the front part more connected with the back part

my ideas. well here is a rough picture to show what i mean.

[jammi]

Out of interest, was that the ship that took on the Order Carrier and abducted Aki? S'a bit small and simple looking to be doing that kind of stuff, isn't it?

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[Tenacity]

well this thing looks more alien but it's hard to add detail to that shape...






Not happy with it at all. Looks like I might still end up using a corvo =(

for the Sides of the wings add some sort of extension to the front and back, and make the front part more connected with the back part

my ideas. well here is a rough picture to show what i mean.

Hm... ill try that.

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[Jacob S.]

I was under the impression you were trying for a light Cruiser of sorts.
Frankly these all look like HF's.

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[Tenacity]

I was under the impression you were trying for a light Cruiser of sorts.
Frankly these all look like HF's.

meant to be sized inbetween a gunboat and light cruiser. VHF's dont have windows along their sides =P

Out of interest, was that the ship that took on the Order Carrier and abducted Aki? S'a bit small and simple looking to be doing that kind of stuff, isn't it?

No, Aki was taken by a C'tan ship.

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