Roleplay Story Competition Feedback

[mwerte]

Well, I am unable to coax any more votes out of the admin/mod team, and it's monday, so here are the results.

Let me preface this announcement with another announcement. I enjoyed all the stories, and they made a 14 hour car ride go by very quickly. I read every page that I printed, and I printed every story I received. I actually look forward to doing this competition again. Maybe in November...

I linked all of these 'winning' stories, because they are all enjoyable reads. If you have a few spare minutes sit down and read one. Methinks these forums would be a better place if more people read the stories forum and less people checked the "General Discussion" forum. And let me say that not just '1st place' was a good story, I spent a fair chunk of time trying to decide between 2 very good stories.

I will PM people with personal critiques when I get the time. (They're all at home written down on paper, and I'm...not at home.)

Places:

• 1: 90,000,000 credits, a spot on the home page, ingame prize
  Stoat | Fortunatus Wright
  
• 2: 60,000,000 credits, ingame prize
  Evyn Hunter (Dab) | Questioning Loyalties
  
• 3: 30,000,000 credits, ingame prize
  Bretonian Buccaneers | With a Yo Ho Ho
  
• 4: 20,000,000 credits
  frozenballz | The Gift
  
• 5: 20,000,000 credits
  Dreygon | Mon'Star the Red
  
• 6: 20,000,000 credits
  jammi | New Dawn
  
• 7: 20,000,000 credits
  n00bl3t | The Chronicles of X.
  

Congrats to all the winners, I'll disperse the prizes at some point this week, and Igiss will change the home page when he can.

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[me_b_kevin]

congrats everyone.

EDIT: i both do and don't look forward to the critques

i know i suck as a writer. when it comes to stuff that is so personal to me like my art and my writing, i have skin so thin you can see through it. that being said i'm always looking to improve.

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Mon'Star the Red- Rated "R" : http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=3224
Aboard the Necrosis- Rated "E": http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=3313

[ProwlerPC]

Awesome job guys and congratulations!
Also to mwerte since this has really kicked story telling up a notch.
I hope this continues and pages of RP keep getting added to the forums :yahoo:

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[Zapp]

Just a curious for next time, can it be a story that you wrote with someone else, or does it have to be one you only did yourself?

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[mwerte]

I've been accepting collaboritive stories, but only the person that 'sends it in' will have the opportunity to win. Although the whole story wins in the end.

Someone else should run it next time so that I can enter my story. Although it probably won't be done by then...:(

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[Exsiled_one]

winner as promised gets 50mil from Kishiro| as well.
Stoat, pm me where to give cash.

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<span style="color:#33CC00">I AM GIVING AWAY MONEY TO CREATIVE MINDS*</span>

[n00bl3t]

Look forward to receiving the personal critique PM.

(Welcome from others as well.)

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Anything I say is not intended as offensive, and to try and deliberately misinterpret it as such would be an attempt at trolling via misrepresentation.

It's not a conspiracy, it's localised bias. They're not intelligent enough to form a conspiracy.

[Donutman]

Woot! Something I contributed too made the list!


:yahoo:


Way to go guys!

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This thread is so stupid that a bird sitting on a nearby tree just EXPLODED.

[Fletcher]

Congratulations! I really should up my writing quality...

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"Oh chuffing blimey, another day, another person being whiney!"
Fletcher's Feedback and Stories Thread

[Magoo!]

A hefty haul everyone's got there.

*shrug* Oh well! An ending only limits your horizons, hence my lack of entry. Enjoy your overabundance of credits.