Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP

[Vince Piccio]

Starting the most interesting part of the story yet... feedback please!

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[thierry007]

i enjoy Reading this i want MORE!!! we want more!

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Yey Planning on going back to the RoS With a leash and collar arround Mah Neck yey. And Will be Active in GRN and EFL... [Once i start playing again]

[tfmachad]

i enjoy Reading this i want MORE!!! we want more!

More is coming soon. We promise. I'll be working on more soundbits in time as well.

Thank you very much for your feedback. If I may ask, what did you like the best or dislike so far?

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[thierry007]

I liked Most of it Altho i got confused With that Part on the Fez.. Further its Nice to read some Bits are short but Powerfull

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Yey Planning on going back to the RoS With a leash and collar arround Mah Neck yey. And Will be Active in GRN and EFL... [Once i start playing again]

[Zapp]

Well now, we have gotten to the part many have asked us about. After several lengthy discussions, me and Gronath have decided to give you a glimpse of the Afterlife, as it is portrayed in this story.

So you know, this does not reflect our actual beliefs, but it is an integral part of the story. So, tell us what you think of it so far!

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[Vince Piccio]

Well.

Me and Gronath (he's not back, but I contacted him and he said he'd love to continue our writing partnership) are beginning work on this again. Figured I'd bump this after over a year of no posts.

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[Elsdragon]

I thought this story was dead Zap...

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No longer a slave to the man!

[Zapp]

It was simply on hold. Until you see "The End" it's not done. If I have to scribble furiously on my deathbed and have someone else post it up, I'm gonna finish this one.

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