Medium/Heavy Fighter Attempt

[Negative]

I made this model a bit ago wanted to see what people thought of it. I did at a point have this textures and hardpointed but when i my comp formatted i only kept the .max file of it.

Images:

http://i45.tinypic.com/agki.jpg

http://i45.tinypic.com/2ij3kna.jpg

http://i49.tinypic.com/5of7mt.jpg

Yeah the images are huge:lol:


[font=Times New Roman][color=#F96807]The images are huge, remember, links are your friend. Changed them for you - Widow.

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Badger! where?

[Captain]

just a random question, where is the cockpit?

on a other note, looks blocky:P

also welcome to this Community, http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showforum=15

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[Elsdragon]

Its a bit blocky..But fairly good. I actually think that fits one of the ships I was workign on Pretty well, but it woud need texturing, amougn other things.

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No longer a slave to the man!

[Negative]

:Dwell it was my first whack at doing this sort of thing. The cockpit is the big nose type thing..lol. I just thought if it was tinted glass it would at least look half like a cockpit XD

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Badger! where?

[Ash]

Kinda looks like a cross between an Avenger and a Marauder.

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[kimiji]

It is a nice first attempt. Well done.


That said I do have some comments. You really don't need to bevel every surface. It's a mistake a lot of beginners make. Beveling is a good thing, but almost every face is done. It makes it look kind of like a big door. I like the scoop on the top. That works very well. You may want to consider dropping the back end of the scoop down slightly, but that is just an aesthetic thing. ^_^

I would also smooth the cockpit out. If you are going to bevel it, take it up instead of down. It looks very odd when the viewports are inset like that instead of protruding.

As far as the modeling goes, very clean. Good job. [[aww, no thumbs up smiley....]]

I really look forward to edits of this and your future ships.

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[Negative]

Thanks :D

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Badger! where?

[Luis]

It is a nice first attempt. Well done.
That said I do have some comments. You really don't need to bevel every surface. It's a mistake a lot of beginners make. Beveling is a good thing, but almost every face is done. It makes it look kind of like a big door. I like the scoop on the top. That works very well. You may want to consider dropping the back end of the scoop down slightly, but that is just an aesthetic thing. ^_^

I would also smooth the cockpit out. If you are going to bevel it, take it up instead of down. It looks very odd when the viewports are inset like that instead of protruding.

As far as the modeling goes, very clean. Good job. [[aww, no thumbs up smiley....]]

I really look forward to edits of this and your future ships.

What he said....

[Corsair]

This could be a viable alternative to a Civilian Heavy Fighter.

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[Aegis]

Maybe we could replace the Waran for this. Its similar to the Waran in its engines and blockyness but not as ugly.....

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