Raven's Talon replacement (re-make)

[jxie93]

Perhaps make the engines and their wings to come out at an angle instead of horizontal?

Also, larger auxilary wings coming out from the engines would also look nice.

But this one is very good already.

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[Cawdor]

@schlurbi:
I did what you said about the Engines...

@Community -
I remade the version a slightly better perspective. Hope you like. Texturing will be done momentarily.

The only feedback I have left is that you could use some more window surface to the right and left of the cockpit. Might also be an idea to even make the bottom of the cockpit transparent or something.

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[Tenacity]

The little fins you have coming off of each engine need to be removed, they look way too flimsy.

Other than that, looks good. Keeps the feel of the current ship, which is really why people like it =P

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[Kazinsal]

Oh god Luis this is the best thing ever.

Devs, please get this in the mod for 4.86! Pweeeeze?

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Retired, permanently.

[Luis]

The only feedback I have left is that you could use some more window surface to the right and left of the cockpit. Might also be an idea to even make the bottom of the cockpit transparent or something.

I though of that, but it made the cockpit look goofy. So, it is better to leave it so, imo. Sorry :$

Tenacity says:...
The little fins you have coming off of each engine need to be removed, they look way too flimsy.

Other than that, looks good. Keeps the feel of the current ship, which is really why people like it =P

Actually, I thought of them looking rather quite well, unless i move them a bit closer to the ship - no problem.

[Cawdor]

Cool with me. Anything that could be said about the current model would be nit picking anyway.

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[farmerman]

I personally think it would be better without the connections from the engines to the body - just make them more directly connected.

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[Jeremy Hunter]

I want one.

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[n00bl3t]

To be honest, I think this replacement is more FL-like than the current model in-game.

I like this model, a lot.

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[pipsqueak]

Very nice work..... now here is my critique....

One thing the civilian ships have in common is the tapered eagle wing. With which they all are identified...like eagle, griffin, hawk, falcon etc etc....

Save this file and try this on a new version....just for kicks...

Make it so the link between Fusalage and the engines tapers up to the engines and then make the Engine to Wingtip taper down.....I am interested to see if the Raventalon can mesh in a little bit more than it currently does with the civilian ship line

Take a look at my botched Photoediting attempt to explain what I am sayin.....I am also confirming that I want both wings to be similar (giggle)

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