Trans-Bar and other things needed!

[r3vange]

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[Valhalla Sr.]

Nice, i would pick all 3 if i could ^^

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[Niverlare]

Preview.

Not bad for a start, but the whole laser beam stuff that's going on in there isn't really after my liking.

As for r3v's, skyped with you.

This is still open, guys. Improvements appreciated, as well as more offers.

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[phileditin51]

not quite in the same vein or possibly the same league, but here's one part, and I don't want paying either.

[Niverlare]

Hey man! Of course there's a bunch of really talented folks around here, but I must say that this doesn't even look half bad. Are you still some sort of beginner ? Because if you are, that's a solid piece of work there, just doesn't really fit into the style of what I had in mind.

I appreciate the input nonetheless, I'd give you a token for it, but if you're sure you don't want anything... :$

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[phileditin51]

I actually started on here as ed.philips until my account stopped working, I never bothered asking for it to be looked into because I left the server, not the forum. so no I'm not exactly a beginner, I got in game from making sigs on here, and I still have Skype account, ed.philips38

[Niverlare]

Beginner as in Photoshop, not Discovery. :P

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[phileditin51]

I didn'y use photoshop tho, I used paint shop pro and Alien skin filters.

[Niverlare]

Whatever you used, then. ^_^

Anyway, the picture of the character looks stunningly good in my opinion. If you're still up for a challenge you could try to improve the rest of the bar.

A few things:

-Font: Look for something more modern and fitting, it's a computer message.
-The charpic: Don't center it, put it somewhere on the left or right.
-The style: Might be the hardest part, but I want it to be in some sort of hologram. Check Anomanders first attempt for reference.
-The shape: I'm not a big fan of the shape you've used in your attempt, so I'd like it more sleek and ... well, subtle, perhaps square, but not a whole block, as I said, take Anomanders attempt for reference.

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[phileditin51]

I'll do that, and thanks for the feedback