ID - Freelancer IFF-[color=#ffffff]Freelancer TAG - [NSTO]
Current Leader - Echo_419
HISTORY
[size=17]815A.S
George Morris a Former Zoner & a Millionaire Eastablish a new Force TDF Tau Defence Force For defending & Destroying The Cardamine Republic with many Volunteers & his own Fleet of Fighters,Bombers & Some Gunboats.TDF made many critical hits on The Cardamine Republic Destroying several ships The Cardamine Republic but without any external support his small fleet of ships were not able to handel the The Cardamine Republic's navy so he asked for help to the factions which hated The Cardamine Republic The CR,IMG & the GMG.His call was Replied & all faction Leaders Prepared for a meeting That is to be held next year .Morris in the meantime Renamed the Organization to NSTO [Northen Sirius Treaty Organization]
[color=#ffffff]816A.S
A meeting is called between the High Ranking Representatives of Colonial Republic , Independent Miners Guild & The Gas Miners Guild about the daring Cardamine Republic who are raiding the systems of some of the most powerful Factions in taus & Sigmas.Intel from all the factions tell that the size of the navy of Cardamine Republic is growing day by day by the ever growing Cardamine & Slave Trade.analysis on the navy of Cardamine Republic tells that it can counter the Forces of IMG,CR& GMG anytime even if combined
& can overrun sigmas & Taus the only thing that was stopping them was the war with corsairs. That many fear was soon going to end in the Cardamine Republic's Favor.
[color=#ffffff]817A.S
Leaders of NSTO await the Descion of the Leaders of CR,IMG & GMG
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DIPLOMACY
Allied
Independent Mining Guild
Colonial Remnant
Gas Miners Guild
Friendly
Kusari State Police
Kusari Naval Forces
Neutral
Xeno
Liberty Police Incorporated
Liberty Navy
Liberty Security Force
Synth Foods Inc
Universal Shipping Inc.
Deep Space Engineering
Interspace Commerce
Ageria
Cryer Pharmaceuticals
Gaians
Border World Exports
Bretonia Police Authority
Bretonia Mining and Manufacturing
Bretonian Armed Forces
Gateway Shipping
Unioners
LWB
Red Hessians
Bundschuh
ALG Waste Disposal
Kruger Minerals
Republican Shipping
Rheinland Federal Police
Rheinland Military
Artisan Farmers Alliance
Kishiro Technologies
Kusari State Police
Kusari Naval Forces
Samura Industries
Gallic Brigands
Maquis
Council
Unione Corse
Gallic Royal Navy
Gallic Police
EFL Oil and Machinery
Ile-de-France Shipping
Gallic Metal Service
The Order
Bounty Hunters Guild
Junkers
Mollys
Corsairs
Unfriendly
NA
Hostile
Outcasts Blood Dragons Golden Chrysanthemums Liberty Rogues Lane Hackers
[font=Agency FB]SHIPS FLOWN
Charon - Evo 1B Civilian Very Heavy Fighter
Dacite - KS-779 Civilian Heavy Miner
Eagle - CTE-6000 Civilian Very Heavy Fighter
Raven's Talon - IR-7 Very Heavy Fighter
Sabre - Series Z Border Worlds Very Heavy Fighter
Touketsu - Renzu Corp Very Heavy Fighter
Virage - SV-17 Civilian Very Heavy Fighter
Wasupu - Renzu Corp Civilian Very Heavy Fighter
Mafic - KS-1093 Civilian Super Heavy Miner
Spatial - E78-12 Civilian Deep Space Explorer
Havoc Mk II - XB-2 Civilian Bomber
Roc - CTE-19000 Civilian Bomber
Waran - WAR-4b Civilian Bomber
Ahoudori - T-833-GB Kusari Explorer
[font=Agency FB]EQUIPMENT USED
All kinds of Civilian Guns & Turrets are allowed [Not gallic one]
It's just a timeline, I recommend adding in a more coherent and cohesive description of what it is the group does, where it operates, etc etc, and a more logical line of equipment.
And if you're going to say that "x house signed and agreed to y treaty/document/whatever," then you ought to not say the organization has been around for a while, but rather start it now by drawing up a proposal to these houses, and starting things off in the current setting. Yeah, everyone likes to be part of something that's been around a while, in-RP, but that seems silly with this. And allied to Corsairs, neutral to all lawfuls, allied with the IMG? Good luck with that.
Good concept, needs a major overhaul.
And are you currently existing or is this a draft, designed to catch the attention of people interested in joining this group, once it is made, should it ever be?
It's either the "Outcasts" or "Maltese nation". Cardamine republic sounds like something an 8 year old catgirl admiral would think of... or perhaps that is the niche which you are aiming for, hmm?
Oh, and sunshine... Invading guard systems isn't allowed, so ditch Omicron 85 from your lulwut approved list.
One more edit for the greater good of all: You should also be aware of the fact that none of the houses knows where Cardamine comes from, which means that your entire faction just lost its purpose. :cool: Shine on.
Face the facts: Your faction is nothing more than a copy/paste of what CR is already doing... So, yeah! Join them! Join them now! The faster you join them, the faster you can learn how to be a tosser properly!
' Wrote:It's either the "Outcasts" or "Maltese nation". Cardamine republic sounds like something an 8 year old catgirl admiral would think of... or perhaps that is the niche which you are aiming for, hmm?
Oh, and sunshine... Invading guard systems isn't allowed, so ditch Omicron 85 from your lulwut approved list.
One more edit for the greater good of all: You should also be aware of the fact that none of the houses knows where Cardamine comes from, which means that your entire faction just lost its purpose. :cool: Shine on.
Face the facts: Your faction is nothing more than a copy/paste of what CR is already doing... So, yeah! Join them! Join them now! The faster you join them, the faster you can learn how to be a tosser properly!
As if I didn't already know this, but you have absolutely no trace of happiness or remote approval of the actions of any other human beings within your tiny black heart, do you Jameson?
He's got some good points, and Cardamine Republic is a term frequently used in a derogatory manner towards Outcasts and their "nation," but you don't want to use it in any official documents. And the thing about the houses not knowing where cardamine comes from; that's vanilla. I'm all for vanilla lore being followed as closely as possible, but seeing as Disco took a huge flaming ZELOLT-WUZ-HEAR all over vanilla lore, claiming that the Houses (which were generally referred to as The Colonies in vanilla, just btw,) don't know where cardamine comes from because they didn't know in vanilla is an invalid argument.
A multi-House formed organization that is allied to the Corsairs? No, just no. I understand that you're Outcast hunters and to their smugglers, but the Corsairs still won't want to be with you. Neutral-friendly perhaps.
Gallic Navy and Police will not like you, at least to my understanding since if memory serves, they used The Outcasts to get some local information, correct me if wrong there. But they're generally xenophobic anyway.
I'm also going to take a stab that the Bounty Hunter Guild and Mercenaries will not like you for jumping in on their business, but with you getting a salary lore wise.