' Wrote:Agreed. Here are a few pennies I feel I should toss in about the write-up:
1) The Intelligence Agency of Bretonia sounds clunky. The Bretonian Intelligence Agency flows a little better.
2) The Letter of Marque lets people get away with a lot, but you guys should still intervene in cases of neutral folks being pirated inside Bretonia while doing nothing wrong. It's happened before.
3) I have some stuff for you to do in my updated plans for Chester. I'll send Murphy and Dab the Doc links to show you what I mean.
4) Your policy to foreign agents. The BDM and Kempeitai should be hunted ruthlessly, yes. The LSF shouldn't be treated in the same manner however. I'd recommend requesting the pilot leave Bretonian borders unless they have a valid reason. You can then open a communication with the Liberty government to lodge a complaint (but not in a harsh, brash and insulting tone, as the IAB has with its diplomacy in the past).
5) I like the idea of the interview.
I disagree, as for foreign agents: whoever they'd be, they know too much and pose treat to Bretonia, thus they have to be either killed or imprisoned. Of course I'd let everyone to ask permission, though, to operate within Bretonia, and within certain reason grant such requests.
Ah, I also don't like everyone thinking "if we have a treaty with Liberty, we're their friends" - for example majority of BAF wouldn't feel anything personal about that, I'm sure. They could be even pro-Rheinland, why not?
