Royal Special Forces

[hansen-dennis@hotmail.com]

Ohh, ohh noez, so hard to read.
Please fix the grammar, fix the spelling.

Yeah, please mate. Read it through and set some dots'n stuff.
I'm sure the storie is great, but to be honest the grammar is too flawed to catch someones interest.

Also.

-Your Affiliations?

-Your favoured ships?

-Tech licenses (If any)

-Your main ally?
Also: Space madness? Care to elaborate?


All in all. You should read through some of the other factions stories. Not to copy them, but simply to get an idea of how to write it all down.

Use their text setup as a template for yours.

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