Order Primary Fleet Recruitment Network

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Malice Huang, I appreciate your dedication, however, your application is still
below our standards. I'm sorry to say that your transfer request has been denied.

Adrian Avenson, although I can see your potential, your application is still incomplete, since Section III
is basically absent. We need to know more about you to consider your application. You seem to have
taken the advice to tell about your origin, personality and personal ventures as the only things required
for successful application.

If you want us to consider your application, I suggest to write your biography as a simple text
or extend the parts about origins and ventures by telling us how you managed to get into the Order.

P.S.: Also, you should understand that the Order has relatively small fleet comparing to the fleets of the Houses
and some organisations, therefore it is unlikely that you'll be able to have a Primary Fleet Osiris "of your own",
since each and every battleship counts, and we have few of them. You may eventually reach the rank
that allows you to command capital vessels, but don't expect that you'll be the sole commander
of a Primary Fleet Osiris.

That is all.

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