That's actually pretty good, but still, try to keep the size, font allocation, direction ships are facing, etc., from the original post. Also bargh should be closer to wraith, it's supposed to be ramming. Speaking of which, where did the "Rammen ist die Waffe der Helden" go? That's the whole idea.
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