Bravo! Couldn't have done it better myself! In short, I love your idea for your faction, as well as using some old Vanilla ships that are sitting at some bases rotting. Also, what about making it mandatory that you stay in character as you're building up from a Starflier, even in New York? Just a suggestion.
Again, love the faction idea. Keep it up!
"The thirteen saloons that had lined the one street of Seney had not left a trace. The foundations of the Mansion House hotel stuck up above the ground. The stone was chipped and split by the fire. It was all that was left of the town of Seney. Even the surface had been burned off the ground.
Nick looked at the burned-over stretch of hillside, where he had expected to find the scattered houses of the town and then walked down the railroad track to the bridge over the river. The river was there."
