Tigris Euphrates, I've checked your application and it seems good enough. I'll send you the questionnaire.
Then we'll see how you deal with that and the final decision about you will be made.
Marcos Oliveira, there are several problems with your application that could be fixed.
First of all, it is full of grammatic mistakes, there are parts that I couldn't understand. You could have paid
more attention to the part that describes your reasoning for joining the Order. I also can not understand
what you mean by "buying the Osiris". The Order doesn't "sell" such vessels, commanders are assigned
to them. Anyway, I guess I've pinpointed all the issues. You may send a fixed application whenever you see fit.
Make use of this opportunity and make sure that the application fits our standards,
and then you might have a chance.