You have the administrative blessings. This is the first important thing that counts.
They had no criticisms about your ships and weapons, because they have understood what you have written.
In contrary i miss two ships of the Taiidan line. O.K. one of them might be included within the freighters.
The other one, a HF/VHF is atm unfortunately sold on Battleship Regensburg in Munich.
Also i would suggest to contact the RM command for negotiations. There is absolutely no need to be hostile in an RP manner. RM is in need of more H-Fuel and a support to deal with the pirates in Sigma 13, while it would be good for Gcorp to travel through Rheinland territory, without fighting against RM.
Especially since Rheinlands relations to Kusari were becomming better.
Also i suggest to delete the Kusari Gunboat from your shiplist and replace it with the Spatial. A very formidable ship. This along with the Kusari Explorer and maybe the IMG Gunboat will give you a good exploration force.
At the end, there is one point remaining. Show a good example of RP with your faction.
To all the folks giving criticisms.
Keep in mind, the tone is making the music. I have read some of the posts and they were made in a dictatorship sound. The attitude "listen to the older members and do what they say" is nonsense and BS (i meant not Battleship) I have seen older members with a terrible rp, beeing the worst example for new ones.
Well and the players, having pirate chars, will have to live with that their life in Sigma 13 will become not so easy any longer.
Btw, one day in the past i have seen one of LLJK new memebers, having the courage to travel through Rheinland with a Starflier. He was blown many times by NPC's. When i launched from Dortmund, he was launching from Essen again, so i tried to help him, by attacking the NPC's which was working. So he could flee to Hamburg JG, where he was accompanied by an experienced another one of LLJK. Nevertheless i offered my help and got a not so nice answer from the experienced.
Guess what? I don't take care about. Its a game and very often we all have bad days. Maybe he was enraged by some posts at this time in the forums and had his predjudices against everyone.
I'm happy to see another faction to rp with. A faction that is representing one of the greatest NPC coorporations.