Gcorp rises from the ashes, a Faction Submission

[bluntpencil2001]

--Also, Juan, we have every RP right to seem "pompous" and "arrogant"...we are not considered a House, yet we defeated the most powerful House in Sirius. So it would technically be in character for us to act this way. Regardless of the circumstances of our success.
I apologize if we seemed confrontational over this issue. But I believe you too would be confrontational if we came into your "Faction Submission Thread" and started throwing out "corrections". This thread was posted to announce ourselves more than to allow people pick apart our structure. Not to mention the fact that your first two posts contained nothing but unnecessary flak anyway.
Cool your jets, bud...we'll see you in space! :)

Now, you're making some nice progress... but the pomposity and arrogance mentioned by Juan was entirely out of character. Act arrogant in-character all you like, I really love that... but don't do it out-of-character.

Now, Juan himself has had to deal with criticism before, and he has dealt with it in a very positive manner and taken it as it was intended - constructively(and with good humour, I might add.). Faction submissions are about criticism and advice, not just blowing your trumpet and saying 'look, we've arrived, so deal with it!'

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