Gcorp rises from the ashes, a Faction Submission

[KercKasha]

Now, you're making some nice progress... but the pomposity and arrogance mentioned by Juan was entirely out of character. Act arrogant in-character all you like, I really love that... but don't do it out-of-character.

Now, Juan himself has had to deal with criticism before, and he has dealt with it in a very positive manner and taken it as it was intended - constructively(and with good humour, I might add.). Faction submissions are about criticism and advice, not just blowing your trumpet and saying 'look, we've arrived, so deal with it!'

Which is fair enough, it's just after the first few pages it went from criticism to "DO THIS NOW OR YOU'LL GET BANNED" and other empty threats. They were hardly constructive and just pissed me off.

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