4.86 ID Bugs

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Various ID errors I noticed, and fixed. Grammar/Syntax/Spelling/Flow/Immersion.

LEZARD

Lezard was a Gallic Brigands heavy fighter that was escorting a Unione Corse freighter to the Joineville Base. After completing the escort duty, the pilot whose name was Emile Bartoli remained on the base, and later disappeared along with its ship. The hull may remain in the Seine Nebula as a reminder of how unpredictable the Corse might be at times.

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LEZARD

The Lezard was a Gallic Brigands heavy fighter assigned to escort a Unione Corse freighter to Joineville Base. After finishing his escort duties, the pilot, whose name was Emile Bartoli decided to remain on the base. He later disappeared along with his ship. Its hull remains adrift within the Seine Nebula as a reminder of how unpredictable the Corse can be at times.

UZ-300 "Eclipse" Gallic civilian bomber

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UZ-300 "Eclipse" Gallic Civilian Bomber

PRISONERS

Want some live cargo and high profits? On most populated planets freelancers can buy prisoners and bring them to places where they belong - prison stations or battleships - for reward. Criminal activities in Sirius are on the rise, and the police haven't got enough spacecrafts to move convicts to faraway correctional institutions. Prisoners are locked into small cells with enough light, food and air to survive long journey.

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PRISONERS

On most populated planets freelancers can 'buy' prisoners and bring them to places where they belong - prison stations or battleships - for a reward. As criminal activities in Sirius are on the rise, the police no longer have enough spacecraft to efficiently transfer convicts to faraway correctional institutions. These prisoners are locked into small private cells with enough light, food and air to survive long journeys.

BXJ-5 "Cougar" Gallic Royal Navy Bomber

Built upon the back of the lessons learned during the first truly large scale battles in which Gallic forces were committed, the Couger is vastly improved in every conceivable way than the largely theoretical forbear launched against usurped Royal Navy capital ships during the war.

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BXJ-5 "Cougar" Gallic Royal Navy Bomber

Built upon the back of the lessons learned during the first truly large scale battles in which Gallic forces were committed, the Cougar is vastly improved in every conceivable way in comparison to the largely theoretical forbear which was initially launched against usurped Royal Navy capital ships during the first Gallic civil war.