Liberty Police, Inc.

[Praetyre]

You might want to pattern your factions ranks off real life American Police ranks, with perhaps a few based upon corporate leadership or United Kingdom Chief Inspectors added at the top to keep things consistent. Here's a link; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Police_ranks#United_States

My ideas for your diplomacy section (comments and feedback are welcome);
Liberty Diplomatic Protocols- Updated Semiregularily
Allied (Fellow agents of the Liberty government or organizations in active partnership with the Liberty government. Cooperate, coordinate, assist and offer unlimited and unrestricted access to Liberty space)
Liberty Navy
Liberty Security Force
Bretonian Armed Forces
Bretonia Police
Ageira Technologies
Deep Space Engineering
Bounty Hunters Guild
Friendly (Friends of Liberty. Offer higher priority protection and less stringent searches in our space. Cooperate in emergencies, coordinate if necessary. Offer access to all but restricted (Virginia and Alaska) Liberty space)[color]
Border World Exports
Bretonian Mining and Minerals
Cryer Pharmaceuticals
Gateway Shipping
Interspace Commerce
Independent Miners Guild
Orbital Spa and Cruise
Planetform Inc.
Synth Foods Inc.
Universal Shipping
[color=#FFFFFF]Neutral (Use standard Liberty procedure towards immigrants and foreign persons. Offer protection if needed)
All others
Unfriendly (Give more stringent searching and checking before admittance into Liberty space. Do not, under any circumstances, admit Rheinland or Kusari operatives into our space)
Rheinland Military
Rheinland Federal Police
Kusari Naval Forces
Kusari State Police
ALG Waste Disposal
Blood Dragons
Bundschuh
Daumann Heavy Construction
Golden Chrysantheneums
Hogosha
Kruger Minerals
Kishiro Technologies
Junkers
LWB
Red Hessians
Republican Shipping
Samura Industries
Unioners
Hostile (Shoot on sight in our space, actively hunt and pursue)
Corsairs
Gaians
Lane Hackers
Liberty Rogues
Mollys
Outcasts
Xenos
Class 0 Terrorist Groups (Terrorist groups considered enemies of the state. Shoot on sight, make highest priority for attack, actively plot, hunt and use any means necessary to destroy)
Phantoms
The Order
Hellfire Legion
War (Groups which Liberty has openly declared war upon in formal engagement. Shoot on sight, plot against, make highest priority for attack, hunt and invade home territory)
Nomads (This includes anyone aiding, abetting, plotting with, affiliated with, supporting, fraternizing or militantly defending the Nomadic race)

Also, I would suggest having seperate naming formats for different classes of police ships. For example;
Personal Ships (Equivalent to police cars)
[LPI]-X
Capital Ships (Equivalent to police cruisers and APCs)
[LPI]-LPC-X
Prison Vessels (Equivalent to paddywagons and ancient Roman galleys)
[LPI]-LPP-X
Bank Vaults (Self explanatory)
[LPI-LPV-X

I agree with your idea of restricting Zone 21 from operation in New York, and I would like to suggest you restrict pilots from entering Alaska as well. It is equivalent to Area 51, which even normal military traffic, much less law enforcement are forbidden from flying over. The LSF guards Zone 21, you guys police the rest of Sirius.

One last suggestion I have. Assigning each of your officers to a single system, unless they are very high ranking officers, similar to the different departments of real life police forces.

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