Whoa... I don't think you need to copy my walls of text from the "Internal Affairs" thread. Just the opening post to the "Information and Feedback" thread ought to be enough. Maybe a few other things, too; take a look at the approved creation requests from other factions here to see how they did it. But at the very least, remove the Internal Affairs part.
In any case, you guys have certainly stepped up the activity in ways that I never could have dreamed of when I was in charge. Kudos for that, and good luck on the officialness.