Judcial Order

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Your RP backround is good.

Now, lets start:

Out of this chaos on a small number of worlds there evolved the Judges. They were men and women tired of war and devoted to peace. Over the years they gathered in Coronado and built a great station in secret called Tannhauser Gate. People of peace are generally people of science and at their base they developed the following ships:

Judicial Pocket Battleship/Magistrate class (design under development)
Judicial Cruiser/ Litigation class (design under development)
Judicial Gunboat/Conviction class (design under development)
Judicial Bomber/Verdict class (design under development)
Judicial VHF/Bailiff class (design under development)
Judicial HF/Plaintiff class (design under development)
Judicial LF/Felony (design under development)

You are already making up your own shipline. I would understand an VHF or HF but, whole shipline with Cruisers and Battleships? Thats bit too much for now you know.

Even, requesting your own shipline-making it out at first, wont work at all.

As you are calling yourselves Judges, I would think that you are part of LIberty government, which would act as government, as judging.
Judicial Mission Statement

'€¢ Judges seek to bring Justice to all the worlds of Sirius through respect for local laws and respect of Sirius cluster long held believes in the ancient laws of man.

'€¢ Judges are no societies'€™ enemy. We seek alliances with all factions asking patrol and docking privilege in their space. When in Outcast space we respect Outcast law. When in Corsair space we respect Corsair law. In Liberty space we respect Liberty law. We have no affiliations outside of our treaties of passage. We have no resentment towards anyone.

'€¢ Judges are men and women of high honor showing strong moral character and adherence to ethical principles. They can and have been invited to pass Judgment on systems local affairs with the certain knowledge that they will judge on the evidence and merits of the case. They do this only with permission of local authorities.

'€¢ Judges show integrity as a concept of consistency of actions, values, methods, measures, principles, expectations, and outcomes. Each is trained and the training never ends to insure the integrity of the Judges.

You are mentioning "When in Outcasts space, we respect Outcast laws".

Now, I am not sure that both sides (Liberty and Outcast) would tolerate that.

You would rather be shot by Maltesians or exiled from Liberty or any other case where is involved unlawful and lawful side.

Also you should dedicate to one side, lawful or unlawful. You can't be on both, it simply wont work- rather do other RP like special operative from LSF or BDM or any other inteligence service, being infiltrated into some unlfawful space/planet/home.

Now also you are mentioning whole Sirius.

I dont know if it is truth that all you are doing is standing on top of Newark - I am not present in Liberty for 1 year or so but all I see is people with "Judge" tag standing only in New York. I've never seen you outta colonies or in any other House Space.

Also, whole Sirius would be bit too much for your ZOI-RP
in my opinion.

edit: and what about ID/IFF you are using?

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