Manticore's Feedback Thread

[Manticore]

Hello everyone!

This is the place to drop any feedback you might have about my characters or RP.

For your reference, I've included links to important pages regarding my characters here on the forums. The stories are ordered in approximate chronological order.

James Lambert

Wiki Page (Outdated)

James Lambert is a retired Vice Admiral and Commodore of the Liberty Navy, First Fleet. He was one of the most decorated officers to ever serve in the First Fleet, notably holding the Medal of Honor for the Hudson Crisis, and during his time of service was equally as famous for his heroic deeds as he was for his bouts of erratic behavior. (The phrase "pulling a Lambert" is still used in the service to reference an officer disappearing unexpectedly due to health or personal-related reasons.) He retired unexpectedly in 825 AS and has disappeared from public life ever since.

Missing Man Formation (Complete)
Post-Traumatic (Complete)
At Any Cost (Complete)
Psychotherapy (Complete)
From Darkness (Abandoned)
An Exile Interrupted (Complete)

This Will Destroy You (In Progress)

Lisa Jaeger

Wiki Page (Outdated)

Lisa Jaeger is known in the quiet and dark circles of Sirius as one of, if not the, most capable unaffiliated hackers/computer specialists operating. Beyond that reputation, little is known about her.

A Slave's Game (Complete)
From Darkness (Abandoned)
The Quiet Years (Complete)

Banshee

Banshee is a feared and unpredictable operator loosely associated with the Lane Hackers and/or Outcasts (depending on who you ask). She has not been sighted in over a decade.

In Somnis Veritas (Complete)
Missing Man Formation (Complete)

The Wayfarer

The Wayfarer is an aged Hathor-class gunboat that has been operating as a freelancer for decades, captained/owned by Rob Shaw. Former crew members include Tanya Carmen, Sparrow Terrell, Gage Joiner, Floretta Kingsley, Kouta Miyamoto, and Lex Krause. Former associates/guests include James Lambert, Lisa Jaeger, and James Arland.

Wayfarer: History and Crew

An Exile Interrupted (Complete)
The Quiet Years (Complete)

RETIRED CHARACTERS

Retired Luc Saint-Just Wiki Page From Darkness (Abandoned) Andrew Moray Wiki Page A Slave's Game (Complete) Isabella Ibarra Sir Avery Stirling

Any and all feedback is most welcome!

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