Zapp's Never-Dying Feedback Thread

[Zapp]

Updated list of links to all my stories:

Zapp's Short Stories - Completely unrelated to Freelancer, but still, a medley of the stuff I do in my spare time.

The Zacarias Poncho trilogy:
Part One - The Life of Zacarias Poncho
Part Two - The Carina Incident
Part Three - The Fall of Zacarias Poncho
Epilogue - The Destiny of Zacarias Poncho
An Acquired Taste
Acquisitions
The Carina Conflict
Zacarias Poncho trilogy completed
Flickers - Carina returns

Storylines - A (The Truth be Told) B (Viridian Dreams) C (Into the Mist) D (Morenloc) E (Behind the Veil)

Jason Moore I II

Aboard the MNS Giustizia - The story behind the oldest Outcast Destroyer in the fleet, which has two commanding officers

Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestre - A horror story depicting what happens after you die... and come back

Vic "Lucky" Chonody - The luckiest 14 year old Zoner in Sirius, who also happens to be not-so-lucky in that he remembers his ancestor's lives

Matt Myers - Short bio of the Chief of the LPI

LPI field manual - Hilarious testament to the LPI's incompetence, and offers some useless survival tips

Jarod Mellows - The chief smuggler of the BLS, from humble origins to tycoon

Wesley Richter - Rheinland Military defector, semi-possessed by a Nomad Power Cell, LWB Guard member

Rusty Donut - Tale of the great LPI Dreadnought, and how the LPI are just plain funny (disclaimer: the Rusty Donut is a fully functional Dreadnought)

Fonzie Caprio - The Outcast who is not addicted to Cardamine and in the Blood Dragons

Frank Quinn - Short bio of the LPI Lead Detective

Nickels and Nails - Joint Leo/Zapp story of two brother Freelancers, who just can't stay out of trouble

Light as a feather - story of the Battlestar Tirane.

Eddy Looper - short biography of Liberty Navy Lt. Cmdr.

Esther Carson - short biography of BHG ace, flies Manta

Tamotsu Miyazaki - short biography of a KSP flatfoot

Karly Richter - story of the Daumann shipping captain

Ted Miles, the Misadventures of Gamma Wing - story of an Order pilot and his trip through hell

Caleb Swift - Amnesiac Xeno

The Black Rose - Tale of a Phantom

The DFS Bonnie Lass - the Molly Destroyer

Alexis and Sierra - Lesbian Freelancer lovers

The Alabama - ZNO CAN HAS BS? KTHXBAI.

Questioning Loyalties - Esther Carson vs. Evyn Hunter, who will win?

Arthur Hawkins - Actor gone Gaian

The INCREDIBLE adventures of SPACEMAN SPIFF - nuff sad

Jack Sawyer - LPI officer

The Lucky Penny - Junker whose best friend is a Nomad

Wanderer of the Eternal Night - the Nomad scout

Cordova - story of the 101st ace

Starsky & Hutch - maverick cops, booya

Conflicting Viewpoints - the story of Eugene Debs and La Villa Strangiato

The Lost Precinct - ghost LPI cop

Candlelit Dinner - Black Rose goes on a date... with a Navy man

Paved With Daggers - what happens when a Kusari woman is in control

Constructive criticism would be nice, as well as pointing out all the things that I make up when I have no clue what I'm talking about. I like to be factual, but I don't put too much effort into it.

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