Judicial Order

[Thyrzul]

Just because you collect the new and the pvp oriented players, and build up your activity on the server, train your recruits, all of these won't make you a good roleplaying faction. Numbers of hours mean nothing if you cannot show up with anything useful... or with anything at all besides sitting at Newark and... where now? Conn?



Ah, yes, indeed. Conn. Maybe not sitting at one place this time, but I still doubt you roleplayed anything in there.

Also, this:

Now, as for your lore.. The main issue I take with it is that you're retconning lore and establishing yourself as a powerful, mighty faction, even though there has been no mention of your existence in the past. Slightly awkward. It also clashes with other factions' lore (Ageira, for one), and it would be wiser for you to discuss your plans with them first, and see if you can find a middle road everyone can agree with.

I would rather not see a PvP faction full of newbies and with a roleplay background pulled out of nowhere in all of a sudden, not caring about what roleplay others built up in the latest years... well, I'd rather not see such faction achieve official status.

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