Judicial Order

[farmerman]

After reading through your original writeup and many of the comments which have followed, I have some thoughts to share.

There are some things about the history portion. It does seem like the Second Era is far enough removed from the First Era and before that it could be seen as a separate faction entirely. Perhaps you could get the earlier portions mesh with the established history a bit better but then keep modern times as it is. I could certainly imagine a group might form with claims of lineage from older groups which may have since diverged into separate groups entirely. In particular, the aspects of gate technology and the role the LSF is known to play in connection to it. In particular, the parts with protection of jumpgates isn't that far removed from defense of jumpgate technology. Either the usage of that ID with the rp of being a particular subgroup (with more focused goals, also see below), or descent from such government authority (similar to the Dragons' claims, but Liberty-er) might work better.

The other, and possibly more important, thing is related to your goals. You have it as follows:

• To bring order back to a chaotic universe

• To stem the tide of piracy against the civilian population

• To rebuild Tannhauser Gate and the great library of human history it once held

• To reunite the original four house in peace as our predecessors had seen

They are kind of, well, super huge and broad. While they would sound good inrp, I think it'd be more effective if you had more specific and smaller goals. The Tannhauser Gate goal might be something you could actually work towards, but more specificity in your anti-piracy goals and some first steps toward reunion would make more sense. With short term, focused goals, it seems more Freelancer-y and more in line with a smaller inrp group (so long as you're sticking with FL ID).

As an example, I'll use the Gaians. While one of their major goals is stopping terraforming, they have the far more focused goals of stopping the Harris project, of stopping the Ayr project, and similar.

Maybe define some specific goals for and engage in more activities along the edge of Liberty? That would fit with the anti-piracy stance more than activities in NY, which should logically be pretty safe, even if things aren't quite balanced that way at present.

Anyway, a bit rambly, but hopefully it contains some helpful insight.

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