I see you've put a lot more effort into this since you first posted it. I applaud you for that and I do wish you the best.
I do have a couple more suggestions, though.
Firstly, your list of permitted ships seems rather.....restricted.
In particular, I would add Rheinland civilian ships. Gateway get 90% core with those, so they're obviously intended to be used. Liberty civilian ships might be added too (75%).
And why only the CTE line for escorts? What about other civilian ships, like the Renzu line, and stuff like the Kingfisher.
You should also definitely add the Havoc bomber, which is intended for Libertonian and Bretonian corporations, and freelancers.
Edit: Oh yeah, I almost forgot: The Shetland and Shire are made by Bowex, and this means a Gateway ID'd ship cannot actually purchase them at all. Of course one can still use a different ID to land at Scarborough Station, but I don't think they'd be the first choice for a Gateway transport captain.
And about this:
(04-20-2013, 03:49 AM)Lee-79 Wrote: Pirates are our enemies and should be avoided or engaged on sight.
I think this is a little more harsh than it needs to be. I always considered one of the main advantages of Gateway to be that unlike other shippers (RepEx, USI, Samura, Bowex) they have no sworn unlawful enemies.
They're a very new company and seem to be more "open" than the established shippers.
I suggest changing this line to reflect that. Avoiding pirates is still generally smart, but "engaging on sight" does not sound like something Gateway would do.