The Battered Bastards of Chateau d'if

[Echo 7-7]

... the description sounded RP'ish so I through that in there. ...

If you encounter and Admin in game, you might like to treat their presence from an in-character perspective in order to prevent immersion from being broken. That is the spirit in which those articles were written. Therefore, while they can have some kind of presence in the roleplaying environment, they are still non-canonical and therefore not suitable as part of a faction's history.

The paragraphs make it possible to read, that's better.

You might like to put the faction logo at the start of the thread, center it, and possibly make it a bit smaller.

I would recommend you break up your Diplomacy list into sections, defined by hostility or friendliness.

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There was a sig here, once.