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[Eppy]

Well, mate, I'll be blunt. It's generic and very, very vague. I came up with something similar to this a long time ago; it was much, much more developed, and even then it failed. This kind of Roleplay doesn't work, mainly because it just doesn't fit Freelancer's universe. You're talking here about an entirely new segment of planets; imagine making a whole new sector of Discovery, ten, twelve systems. It won't happen, and it can't be effectively Roleplayed. Believe me, I've tried.

What's worse, you're trying to create another Outcast faction. We already have three, mate, and the chain of command is none too clear; our pilots, in general, are much better than the Corsairs, but there are fewer of us; we just get swarmed by twice as many Corsairs as there are Outcasts, and the only thing that keeps us alive is our organization and superior skill. With three factions it's difficult to rally all the forces and get hem moving in the same direction as if there were only one; adding a fourth would be suicide. So, in addition to having a void Roleplay, you'd be destroying your friendly NPC factions' position.

So, what can you do? Pick a different faction, maybe Bundschuh or Farmer's Alliance. If you still want to be Outcasts, join the RoS. They'll teach you how to Roleplay to the point where you can come up with something workable.

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Quick comment - we thought that Panzer was the Leader, Swift. -Agmen

Which Dreadnought was that?

One of your nine.