Now, don't jump down people's throats about this, but you really are copying hardcore. It may not of been on purpose, but it is what it is. It's not a question of the similarities. I'll restate them.
Boards.
Naming convention.
RP (very unlawful sided mercs who follow money and get drunk)
I'm an old Reaver myself. I might be a tad bias in this but come on. Bring something new to the table. Nothing you are doing is wrong or breaking rules, it's just very dull. Feedback is feedback, and you asked for it.