Vagrant Raiders (VR-)

[Bootsiuv]

Ok....Kaz, you know I like you.

So, I've been quiet about this as I think it's your rp and your entitled to it. I am a little concerned though, even with the new id you've created.

May I ask how the Vagrant Raiders came to have the manpower inrp to take over systems which organizations such as the Rogues or Lane Hackers could not?

Your sort of just plunking a new house down in the middle of Sirius.

Then, you give yourselves the ability to pirate in almost everywhere but Bretonia, Liberty, and Kusari (which I assume you'll attempt to ally with eventually, if you haven't already), all the while being considered lawful paramilitary in Liberty, Bretonia, and NO space.

It just seems like it still isn't restrictive enough. Get rid of the ability to pirate in every place but the Taus and Omegas. If your determined to be Rheinland's enemy, then make it the omegas and Rheinland only.

You simply have too much of a good thing with this id as it currently stands.

Inrp, if NO is able to somehow justify how it now has the manpower to take over two systems, one of which is already inhabited (not sure if kansas has a npc base or not, can't remember), then do so.

What are your relations with the rogues, and lane hackers, both of whom have inhabited NO space for far longer than you have?

Just a few questions. I like the idea, but I think it's taking it a little far. My advice would be to claim Kansas, as there is little of value there, and Liberty might go for it (although there was a jh to virginia in that system at one time), then if RP dictates that NO has grown and prospered, make further claims if you feel you should.

I think an even more toned down idea might be easier to slide into the lore and make a little more sense rp wise.

At the end of the day though, I wouldn't mind seeing Kansas active, and I wish you good luck on your bid for officaldom.

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