Alliance Star Fleet (The Federation) Story + Feedback

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Hey, I can't even read what you wrote and I'm bored so I'm going to style it for you to use if you want or not want, but also so I can understand this faction! Here goes.

Edit: Now having read it, I like the faction idea, it certainly does make sense to me, has my thumbs up. Give me a buzz if I can help you guys in any way!


Narrator: It was the 23rd century. Mankind’s darkest hour.
Computer: Heart rate and respiration: nominal. Life support on-line. Initiating cryogenic freezing. Commencing pod lock-down.
Sleeper Ship: …to Control. IR is complete. Bringing navigation systems on-line.
Control: Copy that. Green-green across the board.
Sleeper Ship: Good to hear. Bringing primary engines on-line. How’s it looking up there?
Control: All systems are go. Launch in T minus ten mintues and counting.
Sleeper Ship: Control? Incoming hostiles, ten minutes out. Should I abort?
Control: Negative. Launch is still a go.

Narrator: The war had been raging for almost a hundred years. We had been fighting for so long no-one could remember the reason why it had all started in the first place. All we knew is that there were two sides: The Coalition and The Alliance. For decades, millions died for the same piece of rock again and again. Finally, one side managed to gain the upper hand: The Coalition.

Control: Coalition carriers coming out of jump. All fighters engage! ASF One, we have lift-off. ASF Two, you are clear. Three is a go.
Narrator: In desperation, the Alliance launched five sleeper ships. The hope was for them to begin again far from the war and strife that had befallen Earth, to start free from the prejudices that had divided us for so long. Each sleeper ship was christened after its patron nation: The Bretonia. The Rheinland. The Hispania. The Kusari. The Liberty.
Escorts: I think we got them! Yee-haw!

Narrator: Against all odds, the colony ships broke through the Coalition blockade and headed for the Sirius system. That was 800 years ago, when we came here to rebuild our lives. We’ve come a long way since then. We have grown. We have prospered. We have flourished. But we will never forget.

Yes, seems like everyone has forgot about the last part:

"We will never forget."

Atticus Rockford made it back to manhattan, when you hear him clearly say "I knew back then that I was spared for a purpose"

The Alliance came into Sirius, settled in, had the issue with the Nomads, still having though, and now they're at war with each other... A great accomplishment I must say! However, we wont fall for this. The idea of this new Faction is about a group of Freelancers getting united and trying to unite the 5 Houses (Liberty, Rheinland, Kusari, Bretonia and Hispania (Corsairs seem to be the only choice for Hispania) in a peaceful way. Basically, to restore the old Alliance. In helping the Houses clean the unlawfulls, we've come to an Idea that the unlawfuls may be one of the many purposes which causes the Houses to fight each other.

The Nomads are still around and as Atticus Rockford warned us about humanities real enemy we have to prepare and be on guard. Those Freelancers are actual "remnants" of Atticus Rockford, followers of his purpose, a combination of The Alliance, the slogan "We will never forget" and of course those Freelancer remind the old elite wing the 45th Volunteers back in Sol War. They got their names as the "Tigers". Those have been group of civilians which just had experience in fighting but soon got a famous and reliable member of the Alliance. An Idol to be remembered... They gave hope to the Alliance as they were falling under the Coalition hands. The Tigers simply together with the Alliance turned the cards back in the Sol War, but it didn't hold for long after the Coalition took over Sol.

However, they've been able to give hope into this, and our faction wants to give hope in ending this war between the houses and get one, once again. The Nomads are our main priority but there are still the Coalition around, this group also fears that the Coalition might once again block them in advancing and actually be able to defend themselves, so the Coalition got their secondary objective. They blame the Coalition for Sol, they think if that nonsense Sol War wouldn't have happened, humanity might have advanced and we might have been able to defend ourselves in a way, so they see the current Sirius Coalition as a threat and they will fight them.

The Gallia also seeks revenge on the Alliance, that's why they gonna be our third objective, maybe even together with the Coalition in our second objective. As mentioned, we will never forget! Please be aware that this is a long termed goal, it's repeating itself, I know uniting the Houses might never be possible but we're a group which actually wants to try it and that's gonna be a long term goal which will keep us always in tact and active, cause we've a repeating process, something that never ends.

Technically a Sirius Alliance (Don't mark this as the factions name yet, just the idea behind) building up by Freelancers and civilians of the different Houses. Together with this goal, we gonna use a fitting name, but first your feedbacks to this please, the name will be discussed later.