Feedback for an faction-to-be?

[Eduard]

Well, I guess Pirate ID would be best fitted for such an errand considering you want to actively oppose monarchies.

Freelancer ID could also be a choice but that would restrict you into either allying with one of the monarchies ( to be able to oppose the other ) or be hired ( supported/funded ) by third parties hostile to the monarchies. ( which in my opinion, makes sense, as such a group you described, doesn't survive without any help/funds from third parties. ( from an ooRP point of view, you need to be hired as a freelancer in order to kill something )

And regarding Freeport 10, as the leader of the Commonwealth, who's home is the Freeport 10, I can say that considering your goals, the active presence you plan to make, centered around Freeport 10, won't be very... uum... appealing if you can say that. I'd actually suggest you move the Freeport 10 ideas into Tau-29.


Your goals/actions can make the Commonwealth distrust you considering its interests, especially considering the fact that you can ( indirectly ) drag itself in the ruckus you cause by making active use of Freeport 10, which is something the Commonwealth won't accept.

However, as the name specifies, it is still a Freeport and it acts like the Freeport, I just said it so you'd be weary of it's ( inRP ) owners and what consequences could happen considering the course of actions you specified for your faction.

Speaking of Tau-29... You mentioned Freeport 6 is opened to UCEL Operations. Now, I'd suggest you first and foremost clear this up from an inRP point of view before claiming it in a such direct manner as it could lead to eventual misunderstanding and possibly QQ, just a warning. Changing the statement to a desire like " The UCEL plans to use the Freeport 6 as a base of Operations " would be more appropriate until then.

Also, before I continue I'd like to leave a suggestion: Courtesy goes a long way ( No, I am not attempting an insult or trying to emphasize a mistake of yours if you thought that, it is just a suggestion for the future. Mainly because both inRP and ooRP courtesy is a variable that keeps a faction out of ooRP QQ as far as I am aware )

But, it's nice to see an anti-monarchist faction, though I have a personal distaste for anything communist related, I appreciate the notion of attempting to do something different than the SCRA. Another suggestion: There are countless other political ideologies that oppose monarchy ( or conflict with ) just as good as communism, perhaps you may find a more fitting one to your faction in time.

More suggestions: I wouldn't use the Zoner IFF if I were you, considering your hostile nature ( do correct me if I am wrong ) since the Zoner IFF states an entirely opposite idea, and it can lead to more misconceptions regarding the zoner lore ( and it's not like we don't have enough already )

Moreover, I wouldn't list the Zoners ( global connotation ) as allied, especially since Zoners are very decentralized, each group has more or less radical different ideologies and as such, it may view your faction differently. I'd take the time to survey the more notable zoner factions and count my faction's diplomatic standing with each zoner faction individually.

I'd also get rid of the Recruit ID from your chart. I personally don't think one can use the Recruit ID for a notable period.


This are all nothing but my opinions, ideas and suggestions. They are not meant to be offensive but helpful and suggestive. It's always good to see new factions created on Disco, and moreover, it's even better to see that they actually turn into something, and not deprave themselves into corrupted spawns of lolwut fests with little to no idea on how to conduct their RP

PS: I just noticed your Edit directed at Drrobe, regarding FP10 used for a possible trade expansion point for your haulers... If that is the final ideas regarding your FP10, I kind of draw back all I said regarding FP10.

Still, I am looking forward to be RPing with you if you have anything in mind concerning FP10

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King Eduard is the greatest