Feedback for an faction-to-be?

[Euca]

Woah, responses...

So what I basically got what that:

1) Freeport 10 is that of the Commonwealth. No biggie, the faction was really rather 'IMG' based anyways.
2)IDs don't match. Yeah, I've been thinking of ways to change that without harming a faction's name.
3) Zoner IFF doesn't fit. Changed it to Freelancer, but might change.
4) Spelling Errors and misunderstandings. Working that out now.
5) *cough*ICMG?*cough*. Yeah, it's like a reincarnation of the ICMG, which I found really interesting, but was dead a loooong time ago.
6) RP, backstory and ideas need to be edited to be more cannon. Ok, working on that now.

EDIT: @Summer: I know I don't get immediate rights to the CR| by being a Warrant Officer, it was just supposed to be a way of gaining trust with them, in hindsight, it doesn't really make sense.

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