(10-28-2013, 11:38 AM)Croft Wrote: Heres the infocards you wanted Swallow, let me know if you want something altered or rewritten. I've actually saved these verions
Serenity
Built in Bretonia during the Gallic Invasion, the Serenity is the second iteration in a line of robust, cost effective ships constructed from mass produced sections, a method successfully pioneered by it’s smaller freighter class cousin the Tranquility.
The upshot of its modular construction lies in the ability to replace entire sections of damage quickly and cheaply, allowing captains to be spaceborne again well before any conventional ship can be repaired. This has made the Serenity a popular choice among pilots who traverse dangerous or unconventional routes.
Preposition - verb agreements:
the second iteration of the robust cost-effective ship-line designed to be mass-produced from pre-fabricated sections,
the upshot of its modular construction is ease of replacement of entire damaged sections
(10-28-2013, 11:38 AM)Croft Wrote: Tranquility
A prototype for a new method of modular construction, the Tranquility marks the entry in a line of utilitarian ships designed to be rugged and cheap to maintain. Built in Bretonia during the Gallic Invasion, this freighter class ship departs from the standard all-round weapon coverage for a more aggressive, forward focused armament. Coupled with its pioneering construction method, allowing entire sections of the ship to be replaced at a fraction of the time and cost of a conventional ship, the Tranquility is an ideal vessel for those who prefer to brute force their way through hazardous situations.
Brute force cannot be used as a phrasal verb:
is an ideal method for those who prefer to use brute force in hazardous situations.
