The Commonwealth

[Eduard]

I really like everything I've seen from this faction during my scoots around in the Taus and such, with one exception. The "gimmick" of your entire faction talking like an explosion in a thesaurus factory is probably one of the most irritating and obnoxious "quirks" I've ever seen. I'm all for having a wide vocabulary, but when your average word length is creeping into the double digits, maybe you should tone it down a bit.

That said, the quality of RP and everything other than the thesaurus abuse is excellent. You keep the Taus interesting.

Like Achille said, the "complicated" speech, or like some say: " CW Speech " and even " Edspeech " ( Kudos to the one who did it ) has a very deep inRP justification.

First of all, it's unique to two main CW chars ( Robert d'Autoine and Achille Nadeau, but it does extend to others, but these two are the archetype of the speech ). It's a speech typical to their flamboyant, eccentric personality, always desiring to mesmerize and astonish people through any way possible

Second of all, it's a method of verbal subterfuge and subtlety, we use it anytime and especially when we want to express certain " under the veil " ideas and propositions that we wouldn't want any random third party who passes by to hear.

Think of it like a form of encryption It's hard for people to know what we want to do if we talk like that... except for our business partners, our business partners do understand us quite decently. It is after all one of the methods after which we select our business partners as well.

We cannot hide our motives with guns so we do it with our words, that's true as well.

All in all, think of it like something which is typical to the personality/RP of a very few of the CW characters and as well as a form of encryption.

I hope I explained it clear enough, if you have any more questions, feel free to ask and I will try my best to answer them.

Also, I cannot properly express how much I appreciate your compliments, so I will end my post with a very warm " thank you "

Thank you

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King Eduard is the greatest