Discovery advertisement campaign - step 1

[Mr.Fabulous]

Thanks, Pepe. This is the updated version with some requested modifications.

- Bretonian Fleet feels too small: should have one/two more Battleships, twice the number in Destroyers, several gunboats and CLOUDS of fighters, a fighter nearby that appears large in the photo, but when far is quite tiny, for sheer size awesomeness
- Bretonian & Gallic Fleets aren't in proper formation: capitals aren't facing in a single, organized direction, while the Gallic Fleet aren't in organized flanks, making it look messy and disorganized (in a bad way)
- Bretonian & Gallic capitals don't feel like they have proper shading against the Leeds Sun. A good sample of what I'm looking for is in Doc Holliday's signature of Med.Force.One.

- Some Engine trails would give the ships a sense of direction.
- Some grain-effect would give the ships that needed speed-feel.

EDIT: Ehr... whoops. Should've asked to volunteer before posting. Got a little ahead of myself. Needless to say, I'd love to help however I can. I specialize more as a discerning eye for quality.

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